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Flowing Script
"This is a beautiful story and my favorite part is the flowing script of it. It's almost poetic and beautiful, very well done. If you could turn this scene into a novel you would have a bestseller on your hands. Great job."
More, please!
"Color me interested! Within a few paragraphs, I find myself really caring about the protagonist and kind of hating the boyfriend. There's a couple of typos, but it doesn't detract too much from the story. This has potential and I hope that you'll continue."
