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Reread!

"I really love this story! I read it on ao3, and I recognised it here as soon as I read the first line, but I read the rest anyway because I like it so much. I love soulmate AUs, and your depiction of Finn's stormtrooper upbringing tugs at my heartstrings. I signed up to Inkitt just so I could write this review. (I was probably going to do it anyway, but I didn't really think about it until I found out I had to have an account to write a review.) I like how you portray all the different characters, my favourite part being the vast contrast between Finn and Poe's knowledge of soulmates."

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Coming Together

"It's well written, with good transitions between perspectives and a very solid story line. The characters were detailed, staying true to canon while also putting a nice original spin on some aspects. Also, there were very little/no noticeable grammatical errors or spelling mistakes. Good job!"

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"Coming Together"

"ABSOLUTELY gripping tale, from the vantage point of FN-2187 (Finn)! Without spoiling, it's a very good story that helps Star Wars fans "fill in the blanks" about FN-2187's obvious incongruent life as a Stormtrooper in the Galactic First Order...good job!"

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Wow

"This is such a good story. I liked the transitions you did between the paragraphs and the plot line was amazing, I've never thought of or heard of a soulmate story like this. Keep writing, you're really good at it."

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The force works in mysterious ways

"This was quite the entertaining read - I don't read fan fiction but I gave this one the chance and I'm pretty glad I did. It was an interesting concept and sort of goes along with what I was totally sensing when I watched the movie."

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