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Enjoyed

"I did enjoy this not sure where it is going. Jade is believable and it is nice to have a strong female lead without all the ridiculous slut shaming that you young girls seem to go in for. The story was well written and the characters came alive in a believable way. It would be nice to read it in its entirety and find out how the characters progress. I don't make comment on grammar as most things on here are first drafts and a good edit will fix most issues. Over all nicely done and a fun read."

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Black Widow

"Love your writing style and the way you portray the characters. Mostly I loved how you thought of bringing a change by making the girl a cold heartless player, I believe this book has a great potential loved it!"

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Great work!

" Great work, just read the first chapter and I'm already hooked!❤💝"

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