What is your opinion?
Awesome book
"Read it it is amazing. the book is so good that i want her to make another book that is better. i know her in real life . she is a great writer and is real "nice". :3 it was too good that it should be a paperbook."
Sun Hunter & Kit Take Over
"Hey Jayfeatherrulesgirl, I have a suggestion for your ideas. I was thinking, why don't you make when the guardians mate and have kits, the kits are born with a necklace of some birthstone. and that's their name, but when the kit becomes a year old the original guardian of that birthstone retires and then the kit takes over the job, the original guardian of that stone will mentor that kit. So if you like the idea respond. Secondly, When a guardian dies it goes up to something like StarClan, but can you call it Sun Hunter, like silverpelt but a constellation that follows the sun around, Well, I think you should call it the Sun Hunter. They should meet the living guardians in their dreams. And lastly please explain what you mean by 'Real Brea' Love, the Great Haidenracer :) P.S I LOVE THIS STORY AND HAD DREAMS ABOUT IT ALL NIGHT!!!!!!!!!!!! No srsly I did."
Intriguing
"I was drawn to this because I was a huge Erin Hunter fan a few years ago, and it didn't disappoint. It definitely had the same flavor as the Warriors books but with a different twist. I like what you have here so far, and I'm intrigue as to what will happen next. I liked the strange vision administered by the spectral visitor. The first chapter creates so many questions in the reader's mind. I want to know more about your protagonist. I will say that if I hadn't seen the picture, I wouldn't have any idea what the creature was - I'm still not sure I understand why the cat has wings. You might give a description of the protagonist to avoid confusion. I also noticed a few typos, but other than that this was a really good beginning! Great work!"
