What is your opinion?
My life of Pain
"Great start! So interesting, can’t wait for more updates"
Interesting
"I really liked your descriptions and how you keep the reader interested throughout the whole chapter. The only thing is you have a few grammar and flow errors thought, but nothing that isn't an easy fix. I can't wait for the next chapter!"
Great job author!
"Absolutely hooked! It's so good!❤❤😍😍😍"
Great Start!
"With the first chapter, I would like to read more of this book to see where it's going. I feel for the main character with the violence he endures from his father. It's quite gripping. Your use of detail is wonderful and I'm glad that you chose not to hold back because things like this do happen in real life. Not everything deserves to be a fade to black moment. I didn't see a summary of the book and I wasn't sure if it was due to a glitch, but make sure for a book such as this, to add a summary and the age range for the novel, which is definitely 18+. Some readers may not want to read graphic violence and this helps them determine if the book is right for them. Don't worry about your chapters being too long. Write them the way you want to. And if you ever think they're too long just remember that the average chapter length in Twilight from Stephenie Meyer was 4,500 words! There were a few grammatical mistakes. The one that stuck out to me was where you wrote the word "are" and I think you meant to say "our." But other than that, they were pretty minimal. I would recommend rephrasing or restructuring a few sentences here and there to help with the flow. To help you find mistakes you could use an online editing tool such as Grammarly. I use it myself. Write on!"
