Interesting way of writing.

"Since i began reading it, I understood it was a play. It's unusual to find a story like this. It's intriguing. I wonder why the author went that way In the style of writing. Overall like that the author took her time, in writing and describing. If my advice helps. I would suggest try going the other way? when it comes to writing I mean. I know each author have there own writing style but it would be nice if you give the story line writing style a chance, may help in getting more readers. just a humble advice. but everything is fine. Don't feel bad and keep it up!"