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Heart warming story

"The characters were described in a very real way, making one feel as if you had known them personally. The story line was written in a very smooth & understanding manner. Some misspelled words were noticed, but did not affect the story. "

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The Mysterious Girl

"This was a very good story. It showed that in spite of many horrible events in a person’s life, with courage, strength, determination and support and love, you can rise above it all. I noticed quite a few spelling errors that could have been corrected with spell check."

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The mysterious Girl

"I really liked this book. Good story line "

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The Mysterious Girl

"I liked the plot simple language good narration and good description."

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The mysterious girl

"Absolutely amazing book "

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Overall story

"Amazing story!"

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best sad story

"this story was an emotional roller coaster it made sad mad and happy at the same time it was so sad i had to shut off my device to stop myself from crying because of reading this book .it seems as though the writer actually experienced this it is the best sad story i have read so far"

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Amazing book

"The most beautiful story i have ever read. It is really very good and writing style is also very simple and easily understandable. I just liked the bond that developed between Chris and Raven. The rest of the characters were also amazing. The ending was quite emotional. Overall the story was fantabulous and a must read for everyone especially girls as it spreads an important message on how girls should be strong and belive in themselves."

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The Mysterious Girl

"Once again ,the author proves she is a fantastic storyteller .I love the leading characters ,their thought processes and their exchanges. The plot is well thought of giving the readers an interesting read .👏👏👏"

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The mysterious girl

"Thank you it's very good"

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Rachel

"Loved this story, was very deep at one point got me in tears , very moving and the love that the characters share. We’ll thought and pout together I’ve been reading this every night and now come to an end … hopefully I can read more books like this! "

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The Mysterious Girl

"What a powerful inspiring story, it had me tears"

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I just loved it... I fell in love with this amazing story..❣❣

"I like everything like everything..."

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Nice story

"Nice story to spend some time with "

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"Great book, I can't wait to read more. If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on NovelStar."

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overwhelming sadness and joy

"I loved this story. I enjoy strong women characters. I was annoyed with Chris at first that he was so persistent but in the end you had to learn to love him. Hailey such a sweet bundle of joy. The story is heartbreaking in that something so horrible could happen. That a young girl could face so many devastating challenges and survive and yet have a heart of gold. Tearfully I read through so much of this book but the ending the tears just poured. Beautiful love story. I did find a few typographical errors here and there but with a quick reread and spell check this can be repaired. Great job. A must read. Maybe will just have to read it a time or two again just to see what i missed. Loved it."

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Book

"Good book xx"

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Love this book💓

"This story is so beautiful and inspiring 💓💓💓💓💓"

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The Mysterious Girl

"This book was AMAZING!!! You did such a great job with the plot. I was so into the story that I couldn't put my phone down. I literally finished reading this book in one day!!! I can't wait to read your other books!!! Please keep up the amazing work!! ❤️❤️❤️"

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Mysterious girl

"The plot was great ..... Nice story line But a little bit too fast No suspense at all It needs to be written professionally "

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