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im ready for more 🥺

"please i been waiting a long time for the rest of this story please continue with it i love love love it damn near addicted "

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His Miss Anonymous

"Wow! It's exciting, intoxicating, enthralling. I can't tell honestly whose the villain and whose the saint b/w them both. Love your story thought and cant wait for more, oooh aaah"

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Update soon!

"Amazing story so far! Can’t wait to see more!! 🥰🥰"

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Very well written . keeps you craving more

"This story just keeps you craving more!"

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His miss anonymous

"It's great story I'm so glad I chose it can't wait for more "

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Addicted

"This story is amazing "

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Very interesting read

"Just wondering how Belle will not be missed by her best friend and parents! Cannot wait to continue reading "

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His miss anonymous

"Quite interesting and I am looking forward to reading more "

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Interesting

"I really like it. I will continue to read it. The plot is very intriguing and your writing style is just awesome. "

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Good so far

"Good so far"

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His miss anonymous

"I really love this book so far the plot certainly is different and a bit refreshing. Only thing I'm not liking is that the chapters are taking to long to be updated."

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Why is there no ending

"Hi 👋 I'm loving ❤ the story but there's no ending so now I have to wonder what happens I'm so sad"

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His miss anonymous

"I love the storyline... Cant wait for the ending"

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Miss Annonmus

"Interesting read "

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Good Job

"Since there are only two chapters I can't really rate the plot of the story fairly however I like the story direction and where its going and how its not your average boy meets girl story, technically. You use the word 'since' a lot. You can use words like; already, until now, after-all, as, considering, words along those lines. I can visualize what Belle is doing and whats happening. Good job on describing the person, or place and I personally like that however I think you should use more words in your phrases. You have a lot of short sentences. I also like the mystery of Kameron's mission or 'goal'. I'll defiantly be waiting for the up coming chapters. So good luck and keep up the good work."

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