Cool poem

"I like this poem, it reminds me a lot of the "river of blood" scene in Pola X. There are some phrases I don't understand: "belittled at", and "the sanctimonious and all things divine" (I tend to think of "sanctimonious" as meaning arrogantly preachy, I don't know if that was your intention?) I really love the image of "trapped in between legs like chains", it's very physical but also emotionally expressive. Anyway please let me know what you think of my story "Hatefuck"...I entered it in the fanfiction contest but I think barely anybody has even read it."