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Abuse!!

"The flashbacks from the past is a very rare thing and I loved it."

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Amazing and beautiful book.

"Your way of writing is very intense and show's Anna's feelings. "

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Abuse

"I love this kind of novels and these days you dont see this types of novel much."

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Damnnn!!!!

"A very intense novel and the characters are just amazing."

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Abuse!

"It's very nice to read stuff like that. Your way of expressing is just amazing👍"

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Amazing

"Interesting. Loved this book"

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Fabulous flashbacks

"I like where this story is going. I especially prefer exposition that gradually lays out the character's backstory through the chapters. Your did that by doing jumps in the timeline and tasteful flashbacks. Good job!"

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Interesting

"Loved it! It's very engaging."

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Horrible past

"It's getting interesting. Wanna know more about her past. "

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Bad memories

"Loved it😊😊😊😊😊 "

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INTRIGUING

"I love this book. The first chapter of the book gives me a clear hint of Anna's life and I really feel bad for her. I love her role and I can't wait to see more. I will totally recommend this book. The writing style and plot is just perfect. Keep it up hun. "

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Intriguing

"I loved it and I would love to continue reading it. I love these genres and your writing is just amazing."

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Intriguing

"I loved it and I would love to continue reading it. I love these genres and your writing is just amazing."

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Troubled memories

"Hi, I liked the way you set base to your story, simple yet interesting. The way you portrayed the feeling of Anna towards her parents was also good. Mostly I loved the physical description of the guy 😁 . It can be a great novel, so do you best to make it a success! Great work"

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Excellent backstory

"This book is a story about a young woman with a troubled past. A tragic event has seemingly caused her own parents to turn against her and her brother, treating them less like their children and more like unwanted chores. The author has done a very good job of portraying a disfunctional family in a realistic light. I am very curious to find out how things got as bad as they did, and I have a feeling the more of Anna's backstory is revealed, the more insight we will get into this. There were some grammatical issues, and some of the sentences could be phrased more concisely and formatted better. However, these are issues that can be resolved through the editing process. The core concept of this story is very good, and the narrative is plain spoken and relatable. You have a lot of potential, so keep it up! "

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