What is your opinion?
Good read!
"I liked your book It’s really good. You need to update the book faster! "
Great idea but lacks finesse!
"I really liked your premise to show us the perspective of a villain. But to do that you must SHOW not TELL and you are 'telling' the entire story without leaving room for the reader to interpret things that happen on their own. The reader must judge for themselves whether the anti hero or villain is truly evil by the actions he does. I follow your line of thinking and what you wanted to create but in order for the story to become alive consider diving more into the psychology of the villain. Why he thinks the way he thinks, what traumas caused him to become anti heroes, what makes it attractive to become the villain instead? imagine yourself corrupting to evil, how would that take place, how would if feel? what would make you turn away from good? don't simply state that it is so... that makes it unrealistic and not believable enough. Draw from real life situations to flesh out. You have very interesting points and thematics like feeling like LOVE is a false reality but why? Did the villain experience so much hurt in the realm of emotions that he became that way? if so, how did it come to be that way? that's where you show it with actions, interactions, but your story sound like you the writer is simply telling it like a campfire story to someone else. I can't seem to connect to the villain or see him as a real person. Don't tell us how amazing the superpowers are, show us. Different heroes? maybe they are all ignorant and narcissists? WHO is your villain? Watch out for your technical writing skills, you have a lot of grammar mistakes and sentences often used in speech that won't work on page. Look into how to structure a story arc. I wouldn't recommend starting off your book with a huge info dump but rather start with a defining personal moment of the villain. a breaking point in the middle of an action will surely draw more readers into your intriguing premise of exploring villains...."
