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Immaculate...

"Honestly, there isn't a valid reason for me not to give this book a five star rating. I mean, the writing was immaculate if not perfect; the grammar and punctuation, flawless, the descriptions were vivid enough and the characters were all well developed. The air of mystery in this book keeps one on edge too. Really, it's great stuff I must admit. However, as much as I liked it, I sort of wanted to be spooked out completely (considering the genre), but I didn't get much of those feelings (heart racing, breathing escalating by ten fold, sweaty palms or just scared in general if you get what I mean) I also feel that the chapters are a little too short (like it literally took me a few minutes to read 3 chapters). Of course this is just my simple opinion, and you could ignore it. Overall, I think this story is brilliant and the writer should feel really proud hence my rating being five. Thanks for the recommendation. Definitely staying on my reading list. Love, Stacey."

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Blood, Guts and Night Terrors

"Well, this should be interesting, because after reading the chapters currently released at the moment. I haven't spotted anything to really critique. Your spelling and grammar seem to be flawless from what I've read and the style isn't too shabby either. These first three chapters are really well done and definitely pulled me in. The characters all have excellent introductions and I can't think of a part that really dragged. An issue I could bring up is the length of some chapters. But then again, it works in favour of the story, as I personally enjoy the pace it is currently moving. But yeah. Really that's it. I usually ramble for ages in my reviews but this has definitely stumped me. So, well done. I can't wait to read more and happy writing!"

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Great Book!

"I really liked this book overall! In the first three chapters, I only caught one mistake, which is extraordinary! The writing style fits perfectly with the whole mood and it really feels like a movie to me. The reason I gave the plot 4 stars is that the beginning kinda feels all over the place, with multiple plots. I'm not sure if they are intertwined or if it's just a backdrop for a bigger story though. So I can't say much- Though, I would try taking some sort of connection through the three. For example, chapter one was with vampires, so in chapter 2 there could have been a statue that looked like one, and then in chapter 3 the dream could have been about vampires. I think that will make it feel like one book! Still, overall, the whole thing is writing beautifully and I hope to see where the story goes from here!"

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