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Diane

"I like the plot of the story, it's twist, but I hate the fact it takes long to update next chapters "

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Good story. Please update.

"Hi Chaya, It's a good story. The only problem is you don't update regularly. All the blessings for ur dad's recovery. Pls update the story asap if possible."

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Well written, amazing story, ❤❤❤

"I loved your story, this really touched my heart, keep writing chaya "

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Love Diane

"Most captivating and non-cliche story ever"

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Diane ❤️

"Wonderful book ...❤️"

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Amazing

"The plot of the story is very realistic, nothing about this story can be referred to as cliche. The story in a realistic sense make the reader understand what an abused and forced woman feels and how she reacts. Many time as a reader we look toward a story which turns out as a fairytale but in the real world that can never happen. Diane really has a lot of character development and all in all is a great read and I would suggest all to give it a try."

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Nice book

"Keep writing "

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Great work

"Many feelings are in my mind, most of them relates to how hopeless the life of some woman is. This is not a fairytale, it is a heartbreaking journey of sorrows, disappointment and dispare. The real life of some women in this world that made you realize how crazy and cruel life could be. Great work keep it up girl!!!"

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Diane

"So far....extremely good and satisfied with the way the story is going...you are doing a great work here....its just that getting an update after a huge time...leads to disconnect with the story and book and that sometimes makes it a bit boring "

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Diane

"Overall just too sad a story , poor diane doesnt seem to get a break and is forever abused in all forms imaginable."

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Diane

"Love the story, i understand about the editing, I wish they let people help with that like on Dreame to help the author know wut needs to be corrected. But ur doin a great job thanx for updating Great so far."

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Diane

"Full of suspense,well plotted ."

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Diane

"When I started reading this story it caught my attention because of the world wide problems with human trafficking. It rages everyone but not much could be donebecause these organizations are protected at times by the different governments of each country. Now Diane is a sad case because she got her liberty the hard way but is now in a worse case position she is married to a millionaire who abuses her with out giving her a chance to speak up. Of course typical for this man. Why does she hold back because she was taught submission and her happiness only is Suji it’s the love of her life her reason for living and now it’s taken away also So what’s left only death. So over all author you have accomplished well because we all are coming to our conclusion as to what will happen. So great job and hope to hear from you again "

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Great story 🙂

"So far so good. I like the story and where its going. Your story is good and you are a good writer. Waiting to read more. Keep up the good work. I wish you good luck😊"

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Diane

"Great story so far.😄 Can't wait for an update.😊"

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Great work

"I am loving it. Thank u for suggesting this book. Although ur grammar needs some work but still I am liking the story.can't wait for the next chapter."

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Superb

"Fantastic story...i just loved it ❣️.........."

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Superb

"Fantastic story...i just loved it ❣️.........."

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Good

"Good story ❤️❤️"

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Diane

"Nice little story. Is this the end? I think it could be much longer. If you update it please let me know. You definitely are a talented writer. "

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