Black_Heart♥

I am a doctor. Trying to tame my wild imaginations by writing. Hope you will enjoy it♥️😊

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Nice and warm.

I liked the way how you described every single detail poetically and the plot. And there are things that i would like to point it out for you to improve, only as a reader not as a writer. Too many nicknames for Mila and everyone calling her with different names makes me confused while reading. It would also be nice if you don't switch POV's often in a single chapter. I get it that you want to cover everyone's thoughts and emotions but it will only confuse the readers and makes them lose interest in reading further. There are some grammatical mistakes switching from past to present but its not a big deal, you can correct it once you do your proof reading. So overall it's a nice story. I could actually imagine me being there reading your words and it makes me feel warm. Don't worry there is still room for improvement. Try to read your own story as a reader, it will help you a lot to make this wonderful story of yours into a perfect one. Good luck on your story and i hope that you enjoy every single step of this journey -T😊👍

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Fascinating

I enjoyed reading every bit of it. I like the flow of the story. As an indian girl myself it was fascinating to me. Looking forward for more chapters. Keep going and I am pretty sure this book will be one of the good ones. Kudos😊

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Wow❤️

So this is my first horror story to read...like ever and it's amazing. I love the way how you expressed Chris's emotions. Your detailed words made me felt like I was there all along. The most important thing about a horror story is the author needs to make the readers feel thrilled and on the edge and you did a good job on that. There are few grammatical mistakes here and there and it can be sorted out once you proofread it. Other than that the plot is awesome and I am looking forward to reading more of your story. Keep up the good work and good luck with future updates.

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Good

I like the plot but then that's it. Please don't take this in a discouraging way. Your story has potential but you need to do some alterations. It feels like there is no emotion in your story. When you read a story you should feel what the characters are feeling and that is missing here. I wish you could put more emotions in your writing. Then it's a bit rushed and it's too hard to continue reading. It makes the reader to give up on reading your story. Try to form more words around your thinking and put some emotions in it and that's it... Your story will be perfect. As for the grammatical errors you can use apps like grammarly. I think your story has a better chance once you rewrite it. All the best for your story. 🙂

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Amazing

The plot is amazing and your way of characterizing is remarkable. Apart from some typos and missing punctuation marks, I don't have anything to point out. I am halfway through the story and yet to finish it. Overall it's a good story and I am excited to read more. Congratulations and good luck on your future writings.😊

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Very engaging story.

This story is definitely good and different out of all the other stories that i read before. The way you portray the characters and their emotions is excellent. Your way of telling story is different and the flow was very smooth but not boring. It gives you the edge and keeps the readers engaged. You are doing a great job and i wish you all the best.😊

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Distinctive 👍

This is a great story. I like the way the flow of the story goes. There is nothing i can say about mistakes in this story than others have and it's not a big deal. This story is different from all the other fantasies i have read. At the end of every chapter you have instigated curiosity in the readers mind. Kee up the good work ang all the best. Hoping to read your other books too😊

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Great story 🙂

So far so good. I like the story and where its going. Your story is good and you are a good writer. Waiting to read more. Keep up the good work. I wish you good luck😊

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Love it

Love it. This is one of the best novel, here in inkitt

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Five times

I love the plot and the way you say it. Overall its a good story. I can see that you are correcting some of the errors that has been mentioned by the readers. That is great. I don't know what to say because even i am a begginer. I wish you to keep up the good work and good luck for i hope your story gets published.😊

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trapping quincy

I love the way of your writing. I don't have enough words to say how much I love this story and the character Caspian. every day I am waiting for the next update

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