Black_Heart♥

Trying to tame my wild imaginations by writing. Hope you will enjoy it♥️😊

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Erotic one shots

Awesome collection of stories. Loved the way of your writing and expression of emotions. Keep up the good work and enjoy writing.😊

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Nice start.

You piqued my interest. I can see the plot is not a regular high school drama. Since there are only two chapters I also wanna know what happens next and what is that unique plot twist. You seem to be new to writing. Find your own style and pace while writing along with reading some other author's work. This is a great start and I am looking forward to more chapters. Keep up the good work and enjoy writing. 😊

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Good

The plot you chose is good. But first of all, you might wanna write more to a chapter. Your chapters are too small. At least try to write 1500 words for each chapter. You are good with the words and delivery. Just try to extend it a bit more and let the readers feel what you feel.
And then there are spelling mistakes and punctuations misplaced but you can correct them when you proofread but try to upload an edited chapter which makes it better for the reader.
Overall nice story, keep up the good work and enjoy writing 😊

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Unique plot

I can see you did a lot of behind work to write this story. This is a unique plot and I was hooked immediately. The only thing is I haven't understood a single thing that you wrote on the first page. I mean I don' understand the link between that and the story. You might wanna explain it more simply for the readers to understand better. Overall all it's a good story and you did a better job at portraying it. Keep up the good work and enjoy writing😊

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Nice and warm.

I liked the way how you described every single detail poetically and the plot. And there are things that i would like to point it out for you to improve, only as a reader not as a writer. Too many nicknames for Mila and everyone calling her with different names makes me confused while reading. It would also be nice if you don't switch POV's often in a single chapter. I get it that you want to cover everyone's thoughts and emotions but it will only confuse the readers and makes them lose interest in reading further. There are some grammatical mistakes switching from past to present but its not a big deal, you can correct it once you do your proof reading. So overall it's a nice story. I could actually imagine me being there reading your words and it makes me feel warm. Don't worry there is still room for improvement. Try to read your own story as a reader, it will help you a lot to make this wonderful story of yours into a perfect one. Good luck on your story and i hope that you enjoy every single step of this journey -T😊👍

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Fascinating

I enjoyed reading every bit of it. I like the flow of the story. As an indian girl myself it was fascinating to me. Looking forward for more chapters. Keep going and I am pretty sure this book will be one of the good ones. Kudos😊

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Very Engaging ♥️

I have never finished reading a story so fast. I love the plot and your writing style. As an amateur, I learned something from your story about writing. The plot is so different unlike many other werewolf stories. I love the way you described how pain and guilt stopping the mates to be together. I could feel each and every one of the characters throughout the story. I thoroughly enjoyed every part of it and this is one of the good stories i have read in inkitt. Keep writing author... All the best.😊

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Definitely attracted to the story 😉

The plot is awesome. I think this book has the potential to become something more once the proofreading is done. Good work author... Keep writing 😊

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Nice plot

You got a good plot going on here. I like the flow of your story. Since I am writing a review just for the four chapters that are available now, I would say it's a pretty good start. But I would recommend you to proofread it and correct some mistakes because it's interrupting the flow of reading a bit. For example, you used death instead of die and there was him/he instead of her/she so I was confused a bit if the main character was a female or a male. It's just 4 chapters so please proceed after correcting some basic mistakes so that the readers don't feel uncomfortable while reading.
As for a general review, you are a good writer you just need some practice and I hope you keep writing and enjoy it. I am looking forward to the remaining chapters because I am hooked. Good luck author. 😊

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Another try for his butterfly

Firstly I will say the good things about the story. The plot is so good. It's worth reading. The author tried her best to keep up the thrill all the way. I was never into thriller stories but this wasn't bad at all.
The disadvantageous part of the story is it was a bit confusing in the middle which makes the readers wanna discontinue. I can see the author is maybe new to writing or maybe English is not her native language. The grammatical mistakes and the confusion make it hard for me to continue to read.
Dear author, this story has potential, you just have to sharpen the edges a little bit. Try to read books as much as possible and gradually you will be able to improve.
Keep up the good work and enjoy writing.😊

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Bleeding hearts

The plot is so good and I like your writing style. There are some mistakes here and there but it's not a big deal once you proofread it. This is a different plot and I wish it would get more attention. Keep up the good work and enjoy writing 😊

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Surprising

This is an amazing story. I am officially hooked. Waiting for the next chapter. Keep up the good work and enjoy writing😊

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My accidental roommate

Your story is good. I like the way you write. But it would be nice to read if you don't switch POV's often. Try to go with the flow and if needed you can switch Pov's. There are some grammatical errors but they can be sorted out once you proofread.
Keep up the good work and enjoy writing.😊

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The feud

It's a great plot and I like your style of writing. It's just that making Andromeda's thoughts look like a conversation was a bit confusing to me. Other than that everything is beautifully portrayed. Keep up the good work and all the best for future chapters. Enjoy writing. 😊

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In the dark

The story is good. I got hooked up in the first chapter. The way you described Eve and Ben's first meeting, I thought Eve already knew Ben since he came back again and all. I felt like the story was rushed, maybe it would be nice if you slow down a bit. But that was completely my opinion if you thought of writing that way then it's fine. Overall it's a good story and I wish you all the best for your future writing, looking forward to the next chapter. Enjoy writing.😊

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Good

I hope you take this review in a good way. Because I am gonna be honest here, you have some serious improvements to do to your story.
First of all, you have to give a clear picture of your story in the blurb. Tell the readers what's interesting and unique about your story. Give them snippets of your unique writing to read so that you don't have to literally mention 'it's a cute story with an interesting ending.'
Then I think you need to improve your way of delivering. Try to write in a way that the reader can visualize your character and her surroundings and feel her emotions. It shows that you are new to writing or maybe English is not your first language. Either way, keep writing you will improve gradually. Please don't give up. Just read various books, try to understand different author's styles of writing, you will get the hang of it eventually.
Finally, grammatical errors which is not a big deal. Use Grammarly or some other app to check your grammar after you finish jotting down.
Your story has potential. Just a few simple corrections and it will be decent. Looking forward to your next chapters. Keep writing and all the best.

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Wow❤️

So this is my first horror story to read...like ever and it's amazing. I love the way how you expressed Chris's emotions. Your detailed words made me felt like I was there all along. The most important thing about a horror story is the author needs to make the readers feel thrilled and on the edge and you did a good job on that. There are few grammatical mistakes here and there and it can be sorted out once you proofread it. Other than that the plot is awesome and I am looking forward to reading more of your story. Keep up the good work and good luck with future updates.

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Good

I like the plot but then that's it. Please don't take this in a discouraging way. Your story has potential but you need to do some alterations. It feels like there is no emotion in your story. When you read a story you should feel what the characters are feeling and that is missing here. I wish you could put more emotions in your writing. Then it's a bit rushed and it's too hard to continue reading. It makes the reader to give up on reading your story. Try to form more words around your thinking and put some emotions in it and that's it... Your story will be perfect. As for the grammatical errors you can use apps like grammarly. I think your story has a better chance once you rewrite it. All the best for your story. 🙂

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Amazing

The plot is amazing and your way of characterizing is remarkable. Apart from some typos and missing punctuation marks, I don't have anything to point out. I am halfway through the story and yet to finish it. Overall it's a good story and I am excited to read more. Congratulations and good luck on your future writings.😊

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Very engaging story.

This story is definitely good and different out of all the other stories that i read before. The way you portray the characters and their emotions is excellent. Your way of telling story is different and the flow was very smooth but not boring. It gives you the edge and keeps the readers engaged. You are doing a great job and i wish you all the best.😊

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Distinctive 👍

This is a great story. I like the way the flow of the story goes. There is nothing i can say about mistakes in this story than others have and it's not a big deal. This story is different from all the other fantasies i have read. At the end of every chapter you have instigated curiosity in the readers mind. Kee up the good work ang all the best. Hoping to read your other books too😊

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Great story 🙂

So far so good. I like the story and where its going. Your story is good and you are a good writer. Waiting to read more. Keep up the good work. I wish you good luck😊

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Love it

Love it. This is one of the best novel, here in inkitt

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Five times

I love the plot and the way you say it. Overall its a good story. I can see that you are correcting some of the errors that has been mentioned by the readers. That is great. I don't know what to say because even i am a begginer. I wish you to keep up the good work and good luck for i hope your story gets published.😊

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Great

I just started to read this out of curiosity because i am not that into this genre. After finishing one chapter i couldn't stop. I didn't finish it but so far its great. Your writing skills are amazing... its just different and amazing and i can learn many things from your writing.

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trapping quincy

I love the way of your writing. I don't have enough words to say how much I love this story and the character Caspian. every day I am waiting for the next update

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