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Retribution

"The author knows mythology and how to weave it into a creative, original storyline. A fantasy/action/ with romance elements, where Gods, Demons, and Vampires from this and different worlds collide and fight on Earth. Ka’ Azalin, the lead character, is a uniquely bold and spirited succubus bounty hunter of Thanonal and is a force to be reckoned with as she hunts an arrogant, rogue, sly God of War, aided by a vampire, David. While Ka ’Azalin is also supported by the essence powers of the Gods of her world, especially Katalina, she must avoid angering or starting a conflict with any earth Gods, especially Nephthys, Goddess of Dark Magic—a character whose complexities are explored by the author. Additionally, Ka ’Azalin has a split soul, where Torment is chained within her, and her inner demon conflicts with her appointed task. Overall, a pacy and exciting read where Ka ‘Azalin presents as an enigma, a weapon, and a sassy sensual siren. Yet she is playful and curious about the earth, particularly its fashions, feathers and technology. Highly recommended."

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Love it♥️

" Can't wait to read more. I'm currently working on my story but I'll try to read this when I can."

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Fantastic!

"I haven't finished this novel yet, but from what I have read, I'm completely hooked! The world-building is well done, and the characters are realistic and distinct! I enjoyed the mythology aspect of it and the Egyptian gods. The plot was great. The writing style well suited for the story. There was no noticeable technical errors, so great job there. Overall, it was an amazing story and I would recommend it to anyone who likes fantasy and mythology."

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Good!

"I enjoyed your story very much! It was very well written. I will try to read more of your stories. -Sandy."

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