Great start!!

"This is definitely an interesting read. I like how the characters are developing with one another as the story progresses. You say English is not your first language and I’m impressed with this book! It’s well written! Two things I would add: there are some missing spaces and extra indents in the story. Another thing is that try adding indents and quotation marks when the characters are talking. Other than that, I really enjoyed reading this story. I like where this is going😁 Keep up the good work!!"