From the summary, I just loved this book. The character's determination is something to grab and fall in love for. Great job! I can't wait to see how this plot unfolds!
Read the story now
However, there are a lot of grammar errors that can slow down the flow of the story. I would really suggest fixing those before uploading more chapters. Your writing style is great with the dialogue but I think there could be more description. And also, the character at times seemed to be questioning her judgement, when her character, correct me if I'm wrong, supposed to be a strong-headed and confident character. I feel like some of those questions written with the first perspective doesn't seem to fit.
But otherwise, I'm looking forward to chapter updates and edits! XD Keep up the good work! :)