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Blinding Light (BLS Book 1)

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Summary

The year is 2340. Does sheThe year is 2340. Does she know that? No, of course not. Mila Hayes, adopted into a noble family after years of running, is given a chance to win the hand of the prince of Iwera. She takes this opportunity for money and for the benefit of her house, which is dropping fast in rank, causing difficulties with finance. Living in the castle, she experiences traumatic dreams and finds a mysterious cat that visits her at midnight from time to time. As time progresses, Mila discovers a deep, dark secret hidden far beneath about her past, or rather, the present. Will she forgive those who betrayed herThe year is 2340. Does she know that? No, of course not. Mila Hayes, adopted into a noble family after years of running, is given a chance to win the hand of the prince of Iwera. She takes this opportunity for money and for the benefit of her house, which is dropping fast in rank, causing difficulties with finance. Living in the castle, she experiences traumatic dreams and finds a mysterious cat that visits her at midnight from time to time. As time progresses, Mila discovers a deep, dark secret hidden far beneath about her past, or rather, the present. Will she forgive those who betrayed her? Or will she be blinded by revenge? Author's Note: This story contains mental disturbance, violence, and strong language. This is book 1 in the BLS (Blinding Light Series).

Genre
Scifi/Mystery
Author
Yiona
Status
Complete
Chapters
68
Rating
4.5 55 reviews
Age Rating
16+

{Slangs}

Dear Readers,

This book initially takes place between the 17th ~ 19th century (exact date unknown). Slangs are part of our everyday lives. We only know so much of history. Slangs are often forgotten, renewed, and renewed each year even.

Without further ado, here’s the dictionary.

Ch. 2:

Merci: Thanks, thank you

Flash the Hash: To vomit

Clavi Cembalo Col Piano E Forte: Harpsichord invented by Bartolomeo Cristofori

Unlicked Cub: A rude, uncouth, and unappreciative young fellow

Nasty Beau: Someone well-dressed but dirty

Pourquoi pas: Why not

Ch. 3:

Viens: Come on

Enchanté: Nice to meet you

Votre Altesse: Your Highness

Church Bell: Talkative woman (can be used as an insult)

Poked Up: Embarrassed

Ch. 5:

S’ilvous plait: Please

Ch. 6:

Arriage Music: Screaming babies

Pudding-Headed Fellow: A total idiot

Ch. 7:

Diddle: Gin

Giggle Mug: A habitually smiling face

D’accord: Okay

Ch. 8:

Chuckaboo: A nickname given to a close friend

Gentleman of Three Outs: Without money, without wit, and without manners: some add another out, without credit

Non: No

Ch. 9:

Mad as Hops: Excitable

Skilamalink: Secret, shady, doubtful

Kickerapoo: Dead

Gut Foundered: Starving hungry

Ch. 11:

Bonsoir: Good evening

Mumbling Cove: A shabby person or an unpleasant, deceitful landlord

Gal-Sneaker: A man devoted to seduction

Fussock: A lazy fat woman

Bricky: Brave or fearless

Ch. 13:

Foozler: A bungler, or one who does things clumsily

Some Pumpkin: A big deal

Roiderbanks: Someone who lives beyond their means, or seems to spendextravagantly

Wake Snakes: Get into mischief

Ch. 14:

Camp Candlestick: A bottle

Tell AThumper: Construct a clever lie

Ch. 15:

Avast Yo: Stop you! Pay attention

Dungbie: Rear end of the ship

Shark Bait: If you’re made to walk the plank, chances are you’ll be shark bait. Also, a dying sailor whose body will soon be thrown into the sea

Clap of Thunder: A strong alcoholic drink

Landlubber: A person who is uncomfortable, or not incredibly skilled, at sea (considered as an insult)

Ch. 18:

Shoddyocracy: People who get rich selling shoddy merchandise or services.

Ch. 20:

Meater: Coward

Ch. 31:

Va au Diable: Go to hell

Salud: You bastard

Ch. 33:

Je suis désolé: I’m sorry

Ch. 34:

Lâches: Cowards

Bâtards: Bastards

Ch. 39:

Ne me remercie pas: Don’t thank me

Ch. 44:

Au Revoir: Goodbye

Retrouve en Enfer: See you in hell

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WARNING: This book contains graphic violence, mental disturbance, strong language, and mature events. Enjoy, and may you dive into the unknown and find your new oxygen.

☆·Yiona·☆



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View 7 previous comments…
author

Somewhere in the Inkitt guidelines it talks about not having glossaries at all, much less up front; I have to say I agree. It might help the later narrative...but only if the reader gets that far 8-)

6 years
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author

Hello, The glossary is amusing but I noticed that the summary has repetitions as if maybe you were in the process of editing.  

3 years
1
author

Hi Yiona,

I just finished reading your story Blinding Light (BLS Book 1) and I loved it so much. Your writing is captivating, and I kept imagining how atmospheric and suspenseful it would look as a comic.

I really loved the scene where Mila Hayes experiences traumatic dreams and encounters a mysterious cat that visits her at midnight. The eerie atmosphere and the unfolding mystery would translate perfectly into dramatic comic panels. Also, the moment when Mila discovers a deep, dark secret about her past adds a layer of intrigue and tension that would be fascinating to illustrate visually.

I’m a commissioned artist, and I’d love to bring your story to life in comic/manga form. No pressure though.I just think your work would look incredible in visual storytelling.

You can check out some of my recent artwork on my DeviantArt (Username – Ev3Verse). If you’re interested, please message me on Discord (Username – Eve_Verse) so we can discuss how to bring your story to life visually. I'll be waiting to hear from you!

Regards,
Evee

a year
1

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