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Blinding Light Review

"After reading few chapters I can say that the story intrigued me. The present and the past well blended, the complexity of the story, the intricate plot, and the characters' development made me give it five stars. Good job. 😊"

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I love it!

"First of all, the introduction captured my attention. I love how the plot progressed and I am impressed by your way of writing. Truly, I could really feel the emotion of the characters in every chapter. It took me so long to write a review as I took a rest due to health reasons but coming back and reading this story made me feel happy. Thanks to you, I did not regret coming back."

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Really interesting plot

"I was a little confused at the beginning of the novel but as the story progresses it gets easier to understand everything. Really good story and your grammar is fantastic. "

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good different

"Very interesting story. Too bad it's not finished. There's tension, mystery, a roller coaster of emotions. Everything to keep you on the edge of your seat. Good job writer🌹"

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Intriguing, Thrilling and A Full Drop into A World that Keeps You Guessing

"If you are looking for a story that keeps you guessing, a writing style that drops you right into the mind of the main character with its sentence structure, filling you with chills, thrills and vivid descriptions, you will enjoy this story! Just when you think you understand what is going to happen next, the twists bring you back to square one in the best way! A great read!"

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Intriguing Excerpt

"This story begins vividly, full of action, description and emotion: a vivid flight into the character's experiences. After the first chapter, everything changes, and we are left with questions: how the first two chapters and the continuation hang together, what the MC's true background is, how the Cinderella-based ideas will turn out. I loved the quality of the writing: how it transported the reader, and how the grammar mistakes - although there were some - weren't so frequent as to disrupt the reading too much. This seems like an intriguing beginning!"

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Blinding Light

"While I don't usually read sci-fi , I thoroughly enjoyed this story. The descriptions are what really intrigued me and kept me glued to the plot. I really enjoyed the author's writing style. Definitely worth the read!"

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Spectacular!

"Dude your dream sequences are brilliant. Rarely well done by writers but you nailed the bulls eyes. I loved the suspenseful, sci-fi thriller, rapt, jarring and enthralling because it makes you want to know what is happening and what's going to happen!"

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Suspenseful

"I am a big fan of the Sci Fi/Fantasy genre and this story certainly didn't disappoint. This story is wonderfully written. Blinding Light is a masters class in imagery and tension building. I was drawn in immediately after reading the prologue and first two chapters. At the time of writing this review, I am still reading this story but so far I am totally hooked. If there is any critique that I can make it would be that I didn't much care for the 12 year time jump. I would like to know more about what transpired in that long stretch of time, but perhaps more will be revealed as the story goes on. I am also looking forward to learning more about how she came to be adopted by her royal family. Suffice to say, I am addicted and can't wait to see how the story unfolds."

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Best Sci-fi/Fantasy Book Till now

"The beginning of the book is enough to grab the attention of readers. The prologue has captivated me so much that I could hardly keep it down. The suspense created and maintained is just mindblowing . The writing style is just outstanding which creates vivid image of the situation or incident . Despite not being a huge fan of Sci-fi/Fantasy story, this book has made me in love with this genre. Now, I have become a lover of this genre. The book is worth reading and is definitely recommendable to everyone!! I just loved the book ❤. Though I guess I haven't finished it till now but reading it this much only has made me fall in love with it Just amazing !!❤ Xoxo~~"

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Just mind blowing!

"This book has got me hooked since the very beginning and I don't what else to say. The amazing setting of the plot, the beautiful character developments, and the vivid descriptions made this book a treat to read. The pacing also sits well with the book and I enjoyed every moment of it! Good job author!!♥"

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Great read!!

"I would recommend this book to just about anyone. The introduction is amazing, but the plot is what keeps you hooked. Read this BOOK!!! "

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Suspense

"I generally really enjoy sci-fi and fantasy stories, but find it hard to find a good one on this site, so I was pleasantly surprised to read yours! I really like the way you immediately created suspense and intrigue, it immediately drew me in and made me want to keep reading. It's clear you've put in a lot of work and research while writing it and that makes it all the more special. There are some grammar and punctuation errors, but with editing those problems will be fixed right up! Can't wait to read more from you."

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Impressive

"The effort you took to do your research about the 19th century slang words and how to incorporate them in the narrative is inciting. The bloody images at the beginning also pull in the reader and makes them want to know more, (they certainly worked on me). Overall a very nicely written story and I'm looking forward to seeing more of it. Good luck! "

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Good and unique!

"I like what you have brought to the table. I like Mila's language style and how you have a definition for the time period's slang words at the beginning of each chapter. I also like the mystery aspect of this story and how you keep your readers wondering what is happening. Keep up the good work!"

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Great!

"Great book! I love your in depth description. From the start it really grabs the reader attention and pulls them into the plot. Keep up the good work! Sorry I took so long. For some reason my first review didn't post and then I got side tracked because I'm moving this week. Keep doing what you're doing!"

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Super interesting

"I'll be honest with my review. The story is interesting, I have read a few chapters and it is already increasing my interest. There are many new words and slangs and that's what makes it special. There is few grammatical errors but it's not a big deal. Guys you should give it a try it's really great. All the best author!❤😊"

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Intense and a slowburn

"The plot pacing is slow but you won't feel it that much because there is tension per chapter. The slangs are a nice addition to the over all lore of the story but you have to keep an alert mind to know what they really meant. There is a fog of mystery most of the time. But for now, I'm having a hard time getting a good grasp of Mila due to her mysterious past. The swapping of the past and the present plus even the further past can be confusing for new readers. Not to mention then 10 year mysterious gap. So, some brain cells will surely burn to keep in track. Thought that's totally fine, too! The downside of an early intense plot is the need to retain this pacing in the long run. If the plot pacing fell downwards for no reason, then it may upset the readers. Keep this up. There is still improvements that are needed to be done in the writing style. It's not my piece of pizza since I am more into YA Fiction and Fantasy BUT I did enjoy the new taste. So far, I have like it and I had put my mid-way thoughts into the comments. I'll surely keep this in tab."

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I'm Hooked

"I really loved hoe you conveyed the pain and misery of the character. I also how you used vivid imagery to accomplish this. Again I was hooked from the start."

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Wonderful

"Everything is just wonderful! the writing style, the plot! boom! you're one talented author!"

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