A Believer

Under His Grace.

I believe that in you, lies the power to change the world. You need only to discover it. (My joy is reading all of your comments xx)

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Spectacular.

Wow, the concept of this story is jarring. I read the first line and I was shaken. The solemnity of her dire situation but the parallax of her relationship with her father is truly intriguing. I admire the expertise of the writing in expansive simplicity.

I'm eager to find out what happens.

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Spectacular!

Dude your dream sequences are brilliant. Rarely well done by writers but you nailed the bulls eyes. I loved the suspenseful, sci-fi thriller, rapt, jarring and enthralling because it makes you want to know what is happening and what's going to happen!

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Brilliant!

What a fun read, already into it I had smiles and chuckles. And I love the way you describe certain quirks about your characters that give insight about them. The granular details, definitely looking forward to reading more!

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7 stars?

What I laugh I had in the first few chapter. Wowza. Although there was a lot of telling, it didn't at all overshadow the proficiency of the story that it was entertaining and enthralling. I find stories are more enjoyable when when as a reader, you care about the characters. You have budding talent, my friend.!

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1st class kind of story.

I loved how it was so down-to-earth and yet so evocative at the same time. Very much a pictorial writing that made me imagine everything clearly and almost feel their emotions too. I love a story that can make m e smile!

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Fantastic. (in a french accent.)

Yoh, I read that faster than I thought. Still roughly halfway. But I could not wait to reach the end. This book had me the shooketh and I just love it when I love a protagonist, it makes a story so much more enjoyable as I much as I enjoyed this one and I cant wait to read more and finish it.

Eeep!

Grateful for the author.

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