A bit of a slow burn
The story is a bit of a slow burn but well worth the read. There are a few minor grammatical errors, but that being said the writing style is outstanding. I am really big on imagery and the author does a fantastic job of painting a picture. While the first chapter does an amazing job of setting the scene, the story doesn't really fully grab the reader's attention until Frank actually has his heart attack as that's when the story really starts to pick up. I did have a bit of a difficult time connecting with the protagonist as he is a bit distant and standoffish but hopefully as things progress we will learn more of his background and begin to relate more to him. His relationship with Renee is beautifully illustrated and heartwarming to read. All in all, I think this a great story.
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