What is your opinion?
Love Myself (Review)
"I like this story very much! Especially, the suspense and conflict of the characters! The one thing is grammar and that's it. I hope you can update on your work. ♡︎"
I see potential
"I like the plot so far, and the buildup is nice too. It keeps you wondering and hooked till the end. The characterization has been done wuite nicely too. The author's writing style can make you hate or love someone, which is a great thing. But there are some problems with the story that need to be improved: 1. Pacing: The plot seems rushed now. . The author should take more time to draw out the fine details and smoothen the rough edges. 2. Descriptions: I think the wuthor should add more descriptions of the setting or people around the main character to make it more lively. 3. Grammar and punctuation: There are problems with grammar, specially with the helping verb. But it is nothing that can't be rectified with some editing. I hope this was of some help. I believe that if the author keeps trying, then they will surely improve. All the best!"
