Tragic beginning

"I really like this so far. It progressed fast but it kept me engaged from beginning to end. I like that Wren has to solve the mystery of how her lover died -- it's cruel and gritty and I love that about the story. I want to know what happens next. The writing was enjoyable and portrayed what was going on very well. I thought that the first few paragraphs were worded in a way that was confusing, and I didn't really understand how it pertained to the story until a while later. I would encourage you to keep posting on this site, because I like your writing a lot. Great work! Keep writing!"