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Choose me or loose me

"Loved it finished it on Galatea. Please send a notification when the sequel will be released. I'm hooked "

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Little mate cute

"Wonderful,i love this story the beginning is n bit sad then turns out to be sweet ,lets see."

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Review

"Fantastic story. Really different from a lot of stories on this app that I've read so far. Some spelling errors that can be fixed with a good edit"

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Really good first read on the app!

"Very good werewolf novel. I like how it’s focused on the werewolf side of things just as much as the mate stuff. Most novels (werewolves and mates) mostly just focuses on the mate stuff and the sudden love and lust. This is different and very good "

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Chose Me or Lose Me

"I really enjoyed this story. Yes there were some grammar and technical writing glitches, but they didn't do any damage. I think there needed to be some more back story on why Bryn had so much hate toward Maria. There has to be some kind of underlying, bottom sucking issue there for him to be so infuriated that he would seek vengeance. I also think that Maria's character really didn't get any attention. Why didn't she try to protect her step-daughter (who she was supposed to be so close to)? If it were my step-daughter whom I asked to come visit, and then she had been kidnapped, I would be out there kicking some hairy wolf a** . I thought Bryn's punishment was too easy. He should have been strip of his title, demoted to Omega, and sent away to some other pack to live out the rest of his days under the thumb of another Alpha. I thought the storyline was well thought out, organized, and progressed smoothly form one event to the next. There definitely needs to be a sequel to this book. Two thumbs up for me. Bravo!"

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Megan's Choice

"My, my, Author, arent you one for twists and turns, plots and counterplots😉🤔 The ending was unpredictable; oxymoronic to say the least Loose ends tied, yet..still left the Reader cliff hanging Good job, Author👊👍👍"

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Choose me or lose me

"I really enjoyed this story and will definitely read it again."

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Great book

"Really good book read it in one day! Really hope there will be a sequel! Left us with a cliff hanger."

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Choose me or loose me

"Really awesome book, looking forward for the next series "

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Great book

"Love this story"

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Great

"Very good!"

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Choose me or lose me

"Awesome book! Wish it had been longer. I hated that the mate bond between Tobias and Megan wasn't better."

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Choose me or loose me

"Loved this story! I do hope you carry this on as a series because you left us wanting more, sign of a good writer! "

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Choose me or loose me

"Very interesting story hope her step mom gets out of that evil pack and there’s an follow up book to see how their future turns out "

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I need part two

"Very good. Nice story. I really would like to read the next book if there will be one. "

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Sweet

"I love how sweet this story is becoming from such a tragedy "

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Great

"I wish the readers could highlight and suggest edits like some other apps cause there are spelling and grammatical errors that can be overlooked when editing by the author. Overall still a good read!"

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Choose me or loose me

"Loved it so much simple, quick, descriptive, finished in a way it doesn’t leave you hanging in a and way but in a good way. I want the sequel so bad!"

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Choose me or lose me

"I loved everything about this story. I wish there would be a book 2 😊"

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Choose me ore lose me

"Good book hope there wil be a second book about her and the King but good book "

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