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Sara 7

"Wow I'm blown away by your mesmerizing story so beautiful and beautifully written plot Thanks a lot dear author. "

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Hope

"The ending threw me for a loop never expected half of the twists and turns throughout the story. Thank you for an enjoyable read "

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Sarah

"Interesting book..good for readers with sci fyi Interest. Hard to put it down once started reading it."

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Sarah 7

"Like it very muf"

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Awesome storytelling

"Well written fast paced and quite enthralling l loved it"

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Sarah 7

"Very good book! Looking forward to reading more about these characters please. I would recommend this book to anyone who enjoys SyFy."

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Loving it

"The story flows and you really get to feel the confusion, helplessness, and slowly building confidence of the main character. Not your typical innocent to hero story. "

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Total Addiction

"Right from the get-go, this is an addiction-fest. The first chapter sets the stage as you're trying to figure out what is happening right along with the main character. And pulse-punding actions begins straight away with an escape sequence and reveal that'll blow your mind. This was so much fun to read. I thought it was worded extremely well and I enjoyed our character's state-of-mind and confusion. I'm sure we'll see her character grow if memories return. Loved it! Shelving!"

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Exciting & Fantastical

"I loved the style of writing; the suspenseful tension; the growth of the characters and the sprinkling of humor throughout the story. I'd recommend this story to my sister - she doesn't really care for this genre, but I am positive that she would thoroughly enjoy this. Great writing!"

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Gripping sci-fi action!

"I like the way this novel begins, it's clean, understandable and fast-paced, especially the action sequences which are the highlight of this story. I find myself immersed as Sarah struggles to survive. There are few things that bothered me though. Sara is a bit of a dim-witted character and the way she expresses her confusion at every occasion is a bit annoying. There were few instances where I thought it could be worded in better ways. Other than that it was immaculate. Good job! Also check out my story! "

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