What is your opinion?
Half Of Rhea
"Absolutely love it, can't wait for it to be completed. "
RHEA
"I don't read books much but this book cannot put down !! OMG 😲 Incredible read !! Well done Renee !! Nothing but the Best !! "
Gripping life story.
"What a life this girl and her son have survived ,as her journey goes on ,we need to hear more of this inspirational nightmare they have been through, keep it coming."
Amazing
"Please update soon I really need more of this"
Brilliant
"One of the best bit of writing I have read on here. I can't fault it. Hadmy here in my youth as I wanted the main character to survive. Just brilliant. Thank you"
Half Rhea
"I’m enjoying this book. I like how it goes into her trying to figure out how to get away. Especially when so many stories make it seem like it’s so easy to get away when it’s really not."
Can't wait to read the rest!
"Excellent storyline. Can't wait to see what happens next xx"
It ended like that
"Enjoy the plot about the abusive partner and how she was trying to start a new life for her and her children. But I'm very disappointed how the book ended I hope in the near future there will be a part 2 or some updates"
Very emotional
"The cover looks nice, but I would get rid of the text that isn't your name or the title. The description sets the story up very well and you can this is going to be a heavy and emotional story. The opening is quite shocking, and you really capture the pain and emotions of the situation. The speech at the start I think should be one sentence, and your paragraphs are a little small but some more bits of detail may help here and there. Also, and this could just be the way of Inkitt’s layout, there are times where there are some sentences in paragraphs that you seemed to have pressed enter before you started a new one. Like I have done with this lin for example which makes the layout odd. I have done the same with this line and I'm not sure if this is supposed to be a new paragraph, or if the line is supposed to be on its on own or if it was just a typo or if it is Inkitt’s layout. There are times where you miss punctuation like at the end of speech before speech marks or it doesn't look quite right. In the chapter The House, she hushed herself...Her body slowly relaxing, is an example of this. I would put either a semi-colon or a comma. Sometimes you use too many commas and sentences would be fine with just the one or would even work better split into smaller sentences. You also repeated in a very short space of time ’she sighed’ - I would change that to a tut or a groan. As well as paragraphs being too small at times there are some that are too long. Kid’s should be kids, and don’’t should be don't. There also one or two times where you didn't start a line or speech with a capital letter. Your descriptions are very vivid and keep the grim tone of this story too. The description of your characters are excellent too, love the attention to detail. The story deals not only with domestic abuse, insecurities mothers often have after giving birth about their bodies and even eating problems in an excellent unashamed way that I know many readers will relate to and be affected by. The reader will feel so sorry for Rhea but also be surprised by how strong she is. I think the reader would benefit known when and where the story is set which I'm sure you can easily give somewhere in start of the story."
7 out 10 Rating over all
"I do find the book a little choppy and hard to follow at times (flowability could be improved) However with that being said, I do like the story as I continuing to read it. No one is perfect, especially when you can't afford a professional editor. Grammar/spelling mistakes are not high priority to me. If you were an accomplished author, than yes, I would expect perfection. Keep up the good work!"
The story is relevant to the present
"I don't want to comment anymore. I have told the author what I think."
