Wayward Lords

"The story has very nice descripti0ns. You can picture everything vividly. However, there were a couple of things that made it hard to read. First of all, there were too many names mentioned (both people and places) in the prologue. I had to concentrate to realize and remember what is what and who is who and it pulled me out of the story. Also, you should consider breaking the paragraphs into smaller ones. I noticed that, in many places even as the story progressed, the descriptions go on and on and there's no much dialogue between them. To me, that was quite tiresome because I prefer the characters to interact more. Other than that, the plot was really interesting. Keep up the good work!"