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"Update faster and make chapters longer"

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The Day that Changed my Life

"Daydreamer........I absolutely LOVE this story. OMG, OMG. I'm getting giddy and butterflies and goosebumps when I read it and even after the fact! I cant wait until this story is complete. I just want to keep reading, I don't want to stop."

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Hihi hi hi hi

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Kerri burch

"I like the story "

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Good book

"Would be much better if you used the word and instead of the & sign"

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Good..bt plzz update faster

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The day that changed my life

"Nice book🙂"

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The day that changed my life

"Nice book🙂"

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The day that changed my life

"Nice book🙂"

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Wow

"I was hooked on the storyline with Lucifer and his wolf sam I love the humor sam brings and Nia his mate. I'm wondering what she is also hiding from him can't wait for the updates soon. "

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The day that my life changed

"Amazing first chapter! Can’t wait for the chapters to follow! The story so far is so enticing I really want to see whats next!"

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Love

"The story is yet to be started but so far I really like the concept of the story. The writer did a good job and I wish you luck for your bright future."

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Eileen

"So far it's cute and getting to the point. "

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Wolf love

"Sweet story"

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It's very interesting. Good job Author

"You should improve your writing style "

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the day that changed my life

"I like the story,very entertaining and not bored reading the story , the story is ver captivating. grammar is ok. I can recommend this story to my friends."

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I like the book so far

"I like the book so far"

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TDTCML

"Story overall it has potential. But let me point out some small things so it can turn into a magnificent book. The story structure needs editing, with dialogue and grammar mistakes. the paragraphs need to be separated from the dialogue so it doesn't confuse the readers. The story has a nice plot revolving around it, but with editing can be better. I also advice that when you write time or numbers in overall use the lettering. it helps it. Fluidity needs to be done on the book. Hope this helps. Keep it up!!"

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