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The Khambishaka temple

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Summary

Nachiket ,a young prince, gets involved in solving the theft of the Nagmani. As he tries also to find out what happened to his parents. Alongside a iccha-dhari nagin or shape changer snake-lady, meeting mythical beasts and living legends, will he be able to save the Nagmani before the theif became immortal?

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
1
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n/a
Age Rating
13+

Prologue

I lie half off my bed. The crimson silk cusions are scattered. A goblet of ruby red wine in my left hand. A dying out lantern flickers in the breeze. I can hear the distant sound of music. The feast is still on. And suddenly, out of nowhere, I hear anklets.....

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Someone is walking towards my pavilion. Queer, all of them should be at the feast... The king's feast........ I prop myself up on my elbows.

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Out of the moon light and into the dim golden shine of the lantern steps a girl. I blink at her.

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She must be some Apsara, some heavenly beauty. She walks lightly towards me....

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Her eyes are beautifully brown, a straight nose, soft lips resembling a bow. Her hair comes upto her waist. She is dressed richly, like some rich courtiers daughter. The gold ornaments look dull in comparison/ contrast to her flawless bronze skin.

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As she starts coming closer and closer, I silk back into the soft silk.

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Now she is looking down at me.

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She starts to lean in, touch my face with her hand.

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My right hand moves of its own accord. And somehow I know it is headed for her neck.

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But my hand grasps on something narrow, smooth, shiny black long thing.

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I blink again.

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Around my arm is coiled a black king cobra. Hood risen, fangs bared, snapping at me.

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I throw it away and the creature falls with a thud on the ground. It coils and gives a hiss.

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As I look at it, I see a red ruby shining on its head. I shake my head and blink at it again. There's no ruby.

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'' Oh my god''; I say as I lie back again massaging my forehead.

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'Nachiket' I think gazing at the goblet, 'this is what you get out of too much wine'.....I hear the thud of the goblet tumbling to the floor as I drift off to sleep.

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