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Eona

"Interesting "

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HEHEEEE

"Yes yes yes"

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Patiently waiting

"Love it please continue writing "

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Love this story..very interesting

"This book is bery interesting,love the plot twist and love triangle too"

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A fresh LGBT vampire novel

"This is a thrilling series with a healthy balance of action, romance, and drama. The story uses characters from the author's 'Immortalized' series with an alternate story and plot. The two can be read independently but it is interesting to see how the characters differ and how they are similar. The characters have personality and grow along the way. If you are looking for lesbian vampire love triangles and a strong plot, this is the series for you!"

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5/5 ✨

"Let me just start off by saying that I LOVE vampire books. Not cringey ones like Twilight though. I love the almost dystopian setting of the novel. Is it bad that I don't feel bad for the humans? They totally got what they deserved. One request that I have is that you try to fit the girls' age in the prologue. I was so confused when I got to the next chapter, and it took me awhile to shake off that confusion. Other than that, this story was great."

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Just what I needed

"For a while now, I’ve gone down a novel hole. I haven’t been able to find a book that holds my interest long enough. Either the plot was badly written or the grammar is too horrible to be legible. This is true for all online reading apps I have an account with. With that being said, I am extremely happy and grateful to have found this book. The plot is amazing. The writing is on the same level as a best selling author. I have even more respect for the author because they didn’t follow the same tired plot used amongst lgbtq books. Thank you for creating this masterpiece!!! I can’t wait to read more. "

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the kiss of immortals

"the story is interesting and somehow unpredictable. I like the characters and how they were introduced slowly in the story. i hope that there will be more dialogues because this makes the readers more engaged to the story."

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Kiss of the Immortal

"I was kinda hopping for some smut honestly but it is a great story and I would still read it nevertheless. A good story smut makes not."

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Its a good book

"I cant wait to continues read more when you add more chapters"

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Hhhh

"Hučín hhfcji ujgfgv "

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