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More chapters

"Please write more, add more chapters soon, eagerly waiting for the next chapters"

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Update please

"Need update "

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This is a interesting stories, good plot

"I like the plot, the storie is good, easy to read"

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Update plsss

"Uhhh update plssssss😭😭😭😭😭"

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Truly captivating

"If clearly justifies the meaning of dark romance"

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Zara

"Good story"

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Awesome

"I like the plot.the writing...the way it's characters are used...the story is so far awesome. The writer is awesome"

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Intriguing and captivating

"It's a sad yet captivating story but hey it's dark novel so exactly what I expected. I can't wait to hear what has compelled Shreryar to do all of this. "

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Update

"Please update I really really want to read further"

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Fiery Madness!

" Young Sheyryar can hardly believe his horrible fate. He is only nine years old and yet is forced to support his entire family. His mother has disappeared long ago and his father has become an almost legendary, evil figure. A selfish and ruthless man who cares for himself and little else. Certainly not for the suffering of his children. Sheyryar and his siblings are truly on their own. Sheyryar arrives home one night only to discover that his modest family home is on fire. As he watches the hungry flames destroy his only home with his siblings trapped inside, a tiny flame is born within his heart. Nothing but a spark perhaps but it grows into a burning knowledge that he will do whatever it takes for him and his family to survive. Perhaps even engage in a deal with the devil himself. A powerful beginning to Nishat Fatima’s novel. It is a story full of anger and revenge and hot passions. On occasion I noted some awkward phrasing, but there was also some truly poetic language use too. I particularly enjoyed how the author described the setting sun. Nishat Fatima is an interesting writter who is worth exploring further. "

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