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Dimension X

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Summary

My Very First Story.It Takes Place In The Future. Justin and his father John has to stop an impending doom from an alternate dimension by an evil version of John. Can they do it?? Will they save the world??

Genre
Action,Scifi
Author
Alwin
Status
Complete
Chapters
6
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Prologue

It was the era of 2309. The machinery was much more advanced than it was with the arrival of John Abraham. He was a brilliant scientist who invented amazing inventions like The Print-X, M-Jet, etc... But the one which gave him a spot on the government’s “potential evil guy” list was the Dimension Cube. It was a cube far more complicated than anything else. What he was working on was far more classified than anything else. The only other person who knew about it was John’s only son, Justin. To his dad, Justin was an average government-used worker who earned a princely sum of $140,000 per year. But he was a part of The Wilders. The Wilders were the remnants of The Black Market after The Great Raid in 2198. They operated under the SuperGrid (Upgraded after The Cyber War of 2174). Wilders were also skilled fighters. The newest bid in the market was the Dimensional Cube. Whoever got the Cube first would be the new Operator of the market. This means that they would have to steal the Cube from his dad. But it was difficult to trick John. So they had to improvise. The only way they could fool him was by 3D-printing a replica and the nearest 3D-printer they could find which will print within a short time-span was with John. John had all the greatest tech there was. He invented most of them, and most were store-bought. It was a tremendous deal. Justin, along with his best friend/Wilder, Megan decided to one day. They set their plan, which guaranteed them success. Megan distracted John out of his lab and Justin sneaked in and printed a Fake Cube. Megan convinced John that he had been spending a lot of time in the lab and should keep a break. And That’s what John did. Justin ran out just in time and left off along with Megan. But instead of selling it, they preferred to know more about it. They tweaked some buttons and a brutal gust rushed around them, and within a blink of their eye, they were not in Washington anymore. This looked a lot more like WW2-era Germany. Upon roaming around, they found the Nazi flag soaring on top of the White House instead of the American Flag. They couldn’t believe it. At first, Megan thought it was a holographic training simulation on a broad scale. But Justin realized that they were in an alternate dimension!! He had overheard his Dad talking about rifts capable of traveling to an alternate dimension. These rifts were everywhere. It’s just that our eyes cannot perceive them. Other Dimensions are way crazier than the originals. Some are exact in one aspect but with minor modifications and others are contrasting… A Nazi soldier spotted them and alarmed the others. He and Megan bolted and amid running, Megan tweaked some buttons on the Cube and what followed them was the same violent wind. This time, they were in a world that looked Retro. It was like a world that had been ripped out from a game. Everything was glitching. Megan wasn’t a big fan of video games. So she tweaked the buttons, but this time, things were different. This Dimension was eerie. The skies were bruised purple and red. Roads were paved with bones and skulls. The cry of millions, if not, billions soared in the dark air. Justin urged Megan to teleport them somewhere else. Just Then, a dark hooded figure spotted us. He came closer and closer. He didn’t stop and They weren’t going to stand idle. They dashed and the hooded figure ran to catch up with them. By then, Megan managed to open a portal and the two escaped from there, unaware that someone/something had followed them too.

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