Review for chapters 1-3

"A great start to a story. Poetic writing in the prologue creates a beautiful musical element that the enhances the main character's backstory. She is very relatable in her softness but also passion for her music. I love that music was what saved her and that it was a whistling window that originally started her on her path. It was a unique detail that told us so much about where she was (emotionally) during that time. The second chapter built up the thriller/desperate character nicely. Chapter three is a little choppy, though I like how the story is progressing. Added mystery! I was surprised when Glory was suddenly holding Jagger's hand. It seemed odd that she wouldn't take his food, but would let him touch her, but that's just me. I was a little worried about the cliche mirror scene. It explained where the character was, but the dialog seemed a bit robotic. With work it could be a more impactful scene. The end of the second chapter created a good hook to interest me in continued reading! Great work so far- You are a very good writer and I hope the next two chapters are just as intriguing and well written."