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Orbs of magic
"Liked it, hope there are lots more in this series. Keep up the great mystery work,till the next ending . A fan"
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Good
"Well the story is really nice, I really enjoyed reading it, but one problem with the grammar, one word though. For eg, your friend, your sister, your father, your son are always written with "you're". But it's really a good story, I can't wait to know the ending."
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a bit copied
"I don't know if you've read harry potter, but this seemed a lot like it. I mean you made the story your own, but the magical schools were like hogwarts, the professors are like those who teach at Hogwarts and you referred to the boy as a squib which is also from Harry potter. Other than that, it was a great book and I'm sure this was just a coincidence. But I'm just pointing that Herry-potter-thing out so it doesn't happen next time you write a book."
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