What is your opinion?
Interesting but can be worked on
"I really agree with the other reviewer, this book is another book that I feel like I've read before, maybe of Wattpad or a similar scene. It doesn't bring out many characters, although there are many characters, it doesn't make them flourish. Instead, they're simply very 1D, the characters are too plain and the story plot needs some working to make it pop. You can easily turn things around and make it more fresh and interesting and unique with your own personal twist to it. Don't retell stories and blend them together, tell your own story. Something only you can write. Still, the writing wasn't bad and with a little bit of work, this story can really become something much better! I wish you the best of luck :) Much love, Coffee. (If you have any questions, feel free to ask. I can try to give more specific advice if you wish to improve)"
Basic
"This story emulates stories I've read before. It doesn't add any different aspect to the cliches of the highschool setting, the bullying, the abusive parenting, the selling of the child, or the one-dimensional characters. There's a backstory for only the main character, the main character's mother, and the love interest. Even then I don't feel like they are actual people. Maybe the story goes too fast. Plus, I can't hate anyone for their mean behavior because they don't feel like people they feel like mouths who just blurt out mean words. Give the characters more back story to back up their behavior. There needs to be a reason why they act that way other than their crush. Add something no one has really done before. Something you haven't read before in any of the stories you've seen. The story goes by too quickly and the story lacks in world-building. My imagination is not being used for this story. It is still early on in your story so you can add a lot to this. Good luck!"
