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𝒯𝒽𝒶𝓃𝓀𝓈 𝒻𝑜𝓇 𝓈𝓉𝑜𝓅𝓅𝒾𝓃𝑔 𝒷𝓎 💋 ᴵ'ˡˡ ᵗᵃᵏᵉ ᵃ ᵖⁱᶜᵗᵘʳᵉ ᵒᶠ ʸᵒᵘ ᵃˢ ᵃ ᵐᵉᵐᵒⁱʳ ᵃⁿᵈ ᶜᵃᵖᵗᵘʳᵉ ʸᵒᵘʳ ˢᵐⁱˡᵉ ⁱⁿ ᵐʸ ʰᵉᵃʳᵗ

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Mysterious and cunning

The introduction to the story is very interesting. We are shown a vague every day-like the relationship between the two girls, things are serene until they're suddenly not. I think you could have made it better by making the contrast about how things suddenly fell apart more emotional and traumatic for the reader, it would have given it more impact.
Furthermore, it would have been interesting to see more glimpses of Anne and Ava's relationship. It would have made the reader connect with the characters.
The dialogues are vague and the paragraphs can be spaced to give readers a better experience, but apart from that, I have no complaints. The story was unique and fresh, the mood and atmosphere is also quite dark but enjoyable. Well done, keep writing, it'll surely pay off!

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SAD!!

The writing makes you cry, a bit dark, a bit twisted. From the very beginning, I knew where this was going. So, I'd say it was majorly predictable? I love how the story is just a few exchange of letters, or more like notes, since letters need addresses and they obviously are oblivious to the fact that they literally live next doors to each other.
I wonder why she fell in love with him, was he nice to her at the beginning, was it something he did? He sounds like the basic cliché bully, we haven't gotten much character description or anything like that, so it's hard to say what they exactly look like. I couldn't picture them together, not even in the end. It sounds toxic and unhealthy, especially since people just don't change their ways so easily.
But I feel like the author must have just wanted to get the emotions and vague idea of the romance and pain across. which was done pretty well. Emotions were conveyed and I felt my heart pang every time she'd get hurt or whenever she'd have those insecure, toxic thoughts, especially since we've all experienced some level of similar experience growing up.
I'd say that you could have created a better atmosphere and made Alex more redeemable in the end. Chloe really sold herself short in the end, accepting him with all his past abuse and all...also, it would have been nice if you focused a bit more on her getting healthier. Just to show the reader that light exists at the end of the tunnel? She can become healthy even without Alex falling in love with her.
But overall, it was nicely done. I feel like it was written for the fun and expression of it, there is plenty of space for development, but it really did make me feel! Well done!

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Suspicion and thriller

I've been waiting to review this book since yesterday!
Now, I'm always trying my best to be very honest with my reviews and criticism, so I hope that you're okay with it and it can help you learn to become better at your craft! Please don't take offence to anything I say.
Firstly, I want to say that your plot idea is absolutely genius! I find it's interesting and fresh and since I'm an avid reader of suspense myself, I enjoyed it.
However, there's something missing. It needs that little push to make it go from an average to a 10, if you know what I mean.
I think that you haven't given us enough of the characters. Roze, for example, I'm reading about her, yet I don't feel like I'm close to her or that I'm getting to know her. Vivid characters always manage to become a real person instead of just being words in a book, but I'm not getting that yet from Roze, and the story needs to have a better focus on her, since that's the title.
If you were going to paint a mysterious scene, you could have begun the story on a more gruesome scene. Focusing on that makes readers feel sympathy for her since it looks like she deeply cares for her dead friend and then she could have been labelled a 'Killer'. That makes us feel panic for her and even paint her like she's the real murderer.
Creating suspense not only in the character's world, but also in the reader's head makes us more engaged. We can constantly keep doubting her and her intentions. Is she really telling us the truth, or is she actually the culprit herself?
But I feel like by adding more characters and creating suspicion between them, you still managed to make it intriguing. Well done! Your writing may need some dusting since there were a few points in which grammar was definitely missing, so that could be improved.
Overall, I believe you need to focus on descriptions more and creating scenes that keep us on the edge. Maybe even focus more on constructing the characters as we go. There aren't many chapters yet, so I can't judge it all, but based on the start, it was an intriguing read.
Well done, I hope that you can take my few words of advice with you as you dive into the rest of the book! And I apologise in advance if I've discouraged you in any way, just know that if you keep writing, you'll slowly improve, and I'll be here to see you right through it!
After all, struggle leads to growth :)

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Unique and Adventurous!

The characters are wicked! They're good, they're awesome, they're different! I quite enjoyed them. I also love the way you write, the narrative was sometimes serious, sometimes hilarious, and the writing style never disappointed, not even once!
It was out of character for me to read this type of story, but I was happily surprised. I love the adventurous trope and the dialogues shared between certain characters, there just wasn't a fault in this, nothing. I have no feedback except some spelling or grammar mistakes, which everyone can make. A few edits and polishing will help with that, but all I can say is: YES. MORE people NEED TO READ THIS!

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Original and magnific!

It has a greek/reality twist that really makes it special, and I've never read anything like it before! The greek lovers and soulmates combination is the bomb, and so my kind of read! The characters were more real than anything else and I really enjoyed this, awaiting more special things from you!

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Searching within

I love the characters outlook on life, something similar to mine. I love the people, the works and especially the way it's written. Really took me away from home for a bit! Really well written hun, it's deep and profound and beautiful ❤❤

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A blend of the present and past

Now, I've finally finished reading so time for the much-awaited review! I want to start things off by saying that my review will be as honest and detailed as I can possibly get it, so, hopefully, you can take away some friendly advice/criticism/feedback from it without feeling offended :)
Ok, so let's begin with the writing style, I think it's fantastic, the dialogues are prompting, and the amounts of mystery building really keeps the story going. What I haven't seen much is descriptive and vivid imagery, all the other reviews say that there is a lot in the story, but I don't think so. I've read it myself. I think that descriptions here and there are vague, although that works perfectly with the theme of mystery you're going for, so keep it up!
Also, the writing style and the book and plot are all fabulous, the characters are interesting, they have depth and are quite fascinating, my only problem with the story itself would be the constant change between the now and the before. The present and the past. Although it gives the story a touch of mystery to it, what it also does is confuses readers.
I myself sometimes didn't understand what was going on, and I understand that maybe confusing your audience might have been your intention, and you might be still writing to find a climax to all the confusion, but I believe there is a better way to do so. When you're going back to the dreams and reality, you're blurring the lines too much, once in a while would be better. Just make sure that it doesn't happen to the point where the reader becomes disengaged with the story.
And that's all I have to say really, I'm quite enjoying the plot twists of the story, the good prince turned evil, the magical spectrum and all those unsolved questions. Just don't hold back too much just to slap it onto our faces later on, let the story unfold at a rationalised pace.
I hope you're not discouraged in any way! I find that clear reasons and ways to improve have been provided, as much as I could give (I'm not a professional). Wish you the best of luck, and of course, I'll patiently wait to see where the story will go!

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Passionate!

The poems are short, they describe everyday actions that most people, in one way or another must have experienced in life. A text left on seen, a love unrequited, losing hope, pushing through. Beautiful messages we all can relate to. Amazing! Keep writing because you're doing great!

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Adorable!

Ahh, I don't know what to say! This was so cute and just adorable!! Short but funny and cute with a little bit of passion to it! Great job!!

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Lovely!

The two men are polar opposites, but they attract and make a good couple together! Love them and Angel is a cutie!
I'd have to agree with some of the other reviewers though, the story needs some work. Some paragraphs are way too long, and they really do disturb the flow, so that needs some improvement. But I love how the characters are depicted, especially grumpy, strict Mr Grey with bright cheerful Jay. Very good contrast and how the plot is developing...yes yes yes! Love it! Well done! Keep writing and improving, especially paragraph lengths, that will make it even better!

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Unique and new!

The characters are polar opposites, and through their tiny little arguments and different views of the world, it really shows. I enjoyed them, they're both fun and a good combination put together. The plot is also very interesting! Getting closer through writing a romance book, wow! Way to bundle them up together, two people that wouldn't have normally worked otherwise.
They remind me of Darcy and Elizabeth from Pride and Prejudice.
Although I could suggest some grammar and spelling app to polish your writing, and adding a bit more descriptions to create a better atmosphere, I feel like your writing is great, and the story is fabulous!
Keep it up!

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FANTASTIC!

The descriptions are flawless, it really paints a beautiful picture for the reader and makes it sound magical overall, and since it's a fantasy, that draws me into the story further.
So far, both main characters have been introduced, and they' sound fantastic, I can't wait to see more of them and their individual personalities.! The plot is still unsure at this point, but from what I've read so far, I'm expecting it to be very interesting!
However, I suggest you give us a bit more of the story in the initial blurb, because it's very vague and although that can be good as an effect, readers will want to know more in detail what exactly they're setting out to read!
Keep writing, I look forward to more updates from you!

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INTERESTING!!

The story starts out and we get a glimpse into Sasha's daily life, her friends, her relations, her uni etc. It's all very normal and cool and the atmosphere is playful but fun. It's also interesting, because we get a lot about the people around her, and that makes her more real to the reader's eye.
The plot idea is fantastic, just like the title itself. I've only read two chapters of this and that's all we have so far, but it's interesting how things are developing so far! Aiden and his girlfriend breaking up, her still having feelings for him, him hating her (which we don't know the cause behind. makes it more curious) !!
It's realistic and fun to read, so I recommend more people check this out! The plot will only be thickening from now onwards.
However, I have a few pieces of advice for you!
Firstly, I'd recommend that you check your grammar and spelling, because it could really interfere with the flow of the story and interrupt the reader's experience. I suggest getting Grammarly, it really helped me a lot too. Secondly, I think the spacing is too wide, you could try to lessen the gaps a bit. And maybe work on your descriptive writing? I believe that including bits and bops to paint a setting will depict a better picture for your story.
So far, it's good, I can't wait to see where this will go!

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Intriguing and descriptive

Your writing style is what pulled me in, to be honest. Very traditional, laid out for all to see. You describe things so in-depth that it's possible not to be able to picture their actions and the characters and their environment. This can be both a good and a bad thing, because there are details that are necessary and slow down the pacing and disturb the flow. A bit of work in that area can develop the experience for readers even further!
But it sounds very promising!! Like a fresh and published book, the idea is creative and unique, the groundwork is all done, and it just pulls you in for a deep dive. It's a story of adventure and I'm all for that! It really deserves a lot more attention for all the effort that went into it! Superb, well done to both of you!

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Interesting start!

The story is still at it's prime, so I can't say much on it. But El sounds very interesting already, overcoming all those difficulties by herself and all, she's a strong character. So far, she's all we've got, so I'm hoping for you to update and let us know about the love interest :)

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Gripping!

It has an awesome beginning that just gets you wanting to know more! The characters and family dynamics, how they come to play in their lives is also very interesting. I enjoyed your writing style, it was descriptive and fun! Dagon was also a thrilling character to read about, and hilarious too!
I'm enjoying it so far!

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CUTE!!

The main couple are very close, they quickly delve into an adorable relationship and they're just..goals! It's interesting to see different family dynamics and attitudes between the two and their different ways of life. I think that the author was successful in showing a lot of love and growth with the two characters. I'd say though, there are a few misspellings and the tenses go back and forth a lot, it disrupts the flow of the story a bit, so that's what you should mainly focus on to make it a better experience for your readers!! Good luck, I'm enjoying it so far!

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AMAZINGG!

I've read a lot of books, and I had to say, the amount of emotional involvement I had with this one is downright crazy! Like, I loved and seriously cared about all the characters, Even Zeus! The story itself is quite predictable at times, but I enjoyed how you worked through it. Bailey's relationship with Gavin was sweet and hot and just beautifully portrayed, although he seems too perfect at times, what would we do for a real-life Gavin, huh?
Anyway the past interloping with the present and them moving forward, those are all things that this book did great with! Plus all those sweet, steamy scenes! You've developed your characters really well! I really really loved this!

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WOW!

To be honest, I took my sweet time reading this. What I really really enjoyed about the book are the characters, the constant plot moving forward and all the magic and darkness that came with it! I can't tell you enough, but the writing style is beautiful! Very much like a traditional book, but still an awesome read! I would say though, since it's published here, it surprised me a bit, but I hope you can get this book, and the following (I'm hoping you've got more in store for us!) out to the world one day, since that looked like your scope with the writing style and all. Very much well done, I loved it!

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WOW!

To be honest, I took my sweet time reading this. What I really really enjoyed about the book are the characters, the constant plot moving forward and all the magic and darkness that came with it! I can't tell you enough, but the writing style is beautiful! Very much like a traditional book, but still an awesome read! I would say though, since it's published here, it surprised me a bit, but I hope you can get this book, and the following (I'm hoping you've got more in store for us!) out to the world one day, since that looked like your scope with the writing style and all. Very much well done, I loved it!

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VERY INTERESTING!

The story is supernatural, werewolf bonds and filled with a drama and mystery that I absolutely love! Accalia is a creature that is powerful yet mysterious, I like her! Even though I feel that they could have had more depth in their relationship (Taylor and Accalia). As a fellow writer, I'm here to support and provide feedback to help you improve! There is so much room for more in here! You can definitely start with the spelling and grammar, but also the description! Make a setting to paint a better picture! Apart from that, the plot was marvellous, and the characters well portrayed...WELL DONE!

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Quite Fascinating and Enjoyable!

The Princess is a well-built character and the whole plot is very interesting! There is fantasy and romance laced through the blurb, and the chapters and enjoyable to read! There is still much area for improvement though! I'm awaiting more :)

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OROGINAL!

The plot is exceptional, getting together through a small accident, it's very interesting! The family conflict and drama running through the plot is also mysterious and adds curiosity to the story. I feel that your writing improved immensely in this book, and I'm liking it so far!

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Fantastic!

It's short but sweet, what was heartbreaking at the beginning turned out to be sweet in the end. A happy ending! Although there were a lot of mistakes in the spelling and grammar's side, it was a breath of fresh air! I think you have a creative mind, keep writing :)

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Suspenseful and intriguing!

It was a brilliant read! The characters are well developed, each with their own scopes and ideas, the mystery is suffocating, it grabs you by the neck and hauls you right through the chapters. I haven't read a book so good in a long time! It kept me silently waiting for any clue to drop off the sky, so that I could pinpoint who was behind it all. It has nice descriptions ad cool dialogue. The story, the way it's written, the letters and journaling style is just so cool, it's beautiful! Well done, author! I'm sure to keep reading this till the very end :)

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There is potential!

The plot is absolutely interesting, and so are the characters, the writing, however, doesn't portray it very well. There is so much room for improvement, you'll see! If you keep writing and editing, you'll be able to get rid of the various spelling and punctuation mistakes! Furthermore, you'll be able to paint a better picture for the book and readers! I recommend downloading Grammarly, it may help in many places! Good luck :)

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A sexy read!

It's steamy, it's hot. Filled with sexual tension and so much more! If you're into romance with a little lust, this is the book for you! Beautifully written, the plot takes you by surprise at every turn. Well done!

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I can feel everything

The plot is so original the characters emotions and feelings clear to the bone. It shows so many issues with society. It's horrificly well written and down to the bone chilling. Some of the things make my skin crawl and as unethical as it is, it's an amazing read. I can clearly read the journal and the experiences and it's revolting but its so fascinating at the same time. We need more!! 🖤

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The lost heirs

Very intriguing and well written. Too much detail and slow paced but its building up! Keep writing ❤

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Showing you love

The protagonist and I both hate Valentine's. That's a similarity I don't find often (I'm a romantic at heart tho) I love your writing style and how you invision the characters. Really well written and I'm happy for Ivy ❤

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Blooming

The layout is pretty awesome and so is the protagonist. She's cute quirky and awesome. However the story line is a bit slow paced and needs more excitement to keep readers reading! Keep that in mind and you'll do even better hun ❤

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Chewing gum

The dystopian in this is really nice. I also like the smut but as a more reserved person I just don't find the thought of sex becoming an everyday thing very comfortable ..involving family at least. The plot is thought provoking of the future and I'm sure many would appreciate your writing, it's impressive! Keep it up hun

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Her possessive blackguard

I love how this is written and...the character oh my god! So intrigued. I like that there are things we can relate to with this characters and the relationship they are growing and building...physically and mentally. Really enjoying it!❤

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Low-key in love

It's recommended to all people who love to lose themselves in the romance and heart break and tragedy of someone else.
-writer san speaking💋

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