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Great start to an interesting story!

"I really like the world you’ve created and the characters with their individual traits! It really got me interested to know what happens next! Maisie and Alex’s powers sound so cool 🤩 Would definitely recommend this book to everyone who enjoys fantasy! Great job author! Love it! "

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Great action.

"There are only two chapters to this so far. But I know it will be great going forward. Great job💜"

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Nice job

"Very action packed and intriguing."

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