You Belong With Me by JeetZ at Inkitt
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You Belong with ME

Summary

Max Marcus Mackenzie, the only heir to the Mafia leader runs from home after witnessing a horrendous event. He abandons his family to start a simple life in a small town. Meghan Gomez makes him feel complete and they end up getting married vowing to be together forever. What happens when he returns to the mafia world and this time takes over becoming the King of Mafia. Will he be able to get his Meghan back to where she belongs......................with him!

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
29
Rating
4.6 21 reviews
Age Rating
18+

Chapter 1

Hello guys!!!

This is my first book and I am looking forward for reviews. I would love to get feedback so that I can make improvements.

Do press Like if you find my work good.

Love you all.

Cheers!!!!!!!


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all the best 👍

6 years
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Sure will

6 years
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Of course I'm excited to check this out!

6 years

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