What is your opinion?
Awesome
"This is an awesome as my title states! I was intrigued with how it is going and wish to read more! It was captivating, interesting, and different. With a thorough read through and it will be even better!"
Brilliant
"I love the way you write and the story progression. The characters are so humane and the plotline is so dark yet irresistible. I love this! Looking forward to more updates 😊"
Very Lovely
"I love your writing style, and your characters, plus their interactions! This will be a very lovely romance novel; I was sad to come to the end!"
Interesting story
"You have an interesting story. I suggest you take sometime to get it edited. I noticed inconsistencies in the used of tenses. Also put your dialogue in quotes. For example: "I am not coming," JeetZ said. I enjoyed reading this story though. Keep writing."
This story is very good, it can be epic
"You have a very good base story.... good flow, I would love to fall in love or like the characters more. I suggest trying to use more descriptive words when describing the touch..like her hand was as soft as a pillow. Her lips were red as cherrys, and ripe for the picking. Or the heat from her body when he stood close could melt the north pole. But you are doing very well... i love the flashback. ..."
A good story
"Overall a good story. I like the narrative. The main characters voice comes out in a wonderful way. There is a lot of good points in the story, but I would work a bit more on the descriptions, and writing style."
I love the story.
"Still in chapter 3 but i love the story line and hope you keep writing"
You belong with me
"Sexy story with interesting plot."
Nice Flow
"This a great start to a a romance in the making! There is a building plot, the characters are good. The first chapter drew me in, overall I liked this work in progress. I tend to stick to fantasy but I would love to see how this develops and ends. Great Start! There is a few grammar issues (dont stress about them until your editing) Overall I would love to see how you develop this story and I hope my comments came across okay!"
Wonderful
"It is a wonderful story keep it up with your more new thoughts.Great job👌🏻👌🏻👍🏻👍🏻"
Great story
"I liked the way the story was written, i felt really nice reading it. I hope you continue this"
Nice content.
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Lovely
"An extremely powerful story.I got the chills so many times toward the end of this book. It completely blew my mind. "
Love and lust!
"Your writing is so beautiful! I liked reading it, even though it's not exactly my type of thing, it was a strong start to the story, promising so much more than that. I think the dark turn was kind of unexpected, as he literally went back to the very place he wanted to escape from, losing meg in the run. But I'm hoping it only gets better from now onwards, especially with the plot line, I'm excited to see where this will go! Keep writing, love! Much love, Coffee"
It's pretty good
"Not really my genre that I like to read but I like the interactions between the main characters. I think your writing style is nice for this genre. Everything flows nice when you read it and you describe things that help make you feel like you are there with what's going on."
You Belong With Me
"This story just sounds so heart wrenching and I believe it will be worth it all. I haven't read it yet but I promise I will Good job because it takes a lot of will power to hit that publish button on any book app"
Promising
"Nice writing, the intimacy feels authentic as the love flows through it. Here´s a few points though: During the coffee-date, the characters start introducing themselves firstly by stating their name, but won´t it be a little weird to go on a coffee-date without knowing someones name in advance? The flashback seems a little convoluted in this stage of the story. It seems like you´d might as well have written it chronologically. It seems like it would be more interesting for structure if you start the story earlier. The reasons why Max left the mob, what he has seen and such and such. Those reasons can then be referred to later in the story, creating a more compelling plot-line and an underlying tension, because we know what trauma´s lay in the back of his head as the story goes. Also, in the beginning, the shifting from thirst to second person point-of.-view is a little confusing. That having said, I really did enjoy the story so far and am looking forward to see it develop."
Really strong start
"I've read a few chapters so far (and intend to read more) and it is a great plot. However, there is some work needed on signifying POV changes and different types of narration. Once that is rectified I think this could be an excellent novel/storyline. Overall, I loved what I've read so far and I look forward to getting back into. Would recommend reading to anyone!"
Good plot!
" Hey beautiful! Your book is really good. I liked 😀it. But there’s a thing missing in it. Quotation marks. 🤓Please do work on it. Because without it. Your book may get boring. But your plot and imagination is really amazing 😉 Love it!!😍"
JeetZ
"This is a great story idea you have but it needs a little working. Check on the inline comments. I would suggest the first and second chapter to be a prologue then the flashback to act as the beginning of the novel. Good luck in your writing!"
