Chloe. J

Romance

Interesting start, MC is developing well.
You have some good inside thoughts, as a reader I know where I am. Which is also good.
I would suggest some minor grammer work 💜

An amazing work in progress

Im usually quite fussy in regards to werewolf novels, mostly because alot have the same style plot.
However you have a unique spin, sometimes switching POV in storys can be very hard to follow. But you kept it up and perfect!
There are a few words missing and letters in some places. (For your final edit, dont stress about them now)
Overall, I loved your characters. Despite Grace and how she was raised and what she is. She remained mysterious and reminded me of someone fully capable in an epic action movie.
Hunter I feel is growing and I love his heavy ties to his best friend and his loyalty.
I also loved how you added little quotes (I took time to read them and loved how they flowed with that particular chapter)
Finally your cover is AMAZING
Good job, amazing work. 💜

Good read

Its an interesting start, suggesting twists to come.
A few errors, but nothing that cannot be fixed!
I would suggest it to those who like this genre!
I will follow and see how it updates :)

Descriptive!

I love how descriptive this book is!
I feel like I can see exactly what the characters are wearing and each character has their own personality that I can easily feel and read as well!
I don't like to play favourites but Nessa is definitely in my list!
I cant wait to read more updates!

Very good!

I like mateo!.. your characters are very likable!
I love where this story is headed!

Amazing

This story is unique, as soon as I began started reading, I knew it was being added to my list!
Keep up this amazing work!!

You had me at pissy chrissy!

A perfect potion of all the things needed for an epic adventure.

Creepy baby ✔

Humor ✔

Perfectly written so much so I was finding my stomach turn on some details of that scab...humor that I lost it at pissy chrissy! Relateable characters! The text that was a great little touch!

I don't want to give away to much!

Likeable Characters!

The Author has a good flow, her characters have personality and quite easy to like!
The chapters so far are paced well and no info dumping!
Recommended for werewolf lovers 💜

Lovely 🥰

I liked the authors writing style, not an overkill of info dumping with every minor detail like some I have read!
Very lovely paced book with an interesting plot...waiting to see how it pans out!
Recommended!

Unexpected

LOVING THE UNEXPECTED EVIL
Reminds me of a famous book, which I am obsessed with. Until now I hadn't had the pleasure of finding anything like it.
Can't wait to finish it!

A game of hide and seek

Great read, interesting plot!
Descriptions were good, overall a very interesting read. No spoilers, would definitely recommend to those who love a good amount of crime and twist in a book!
Author has done well!

Addictive!

You had me addicted, I would attempt to speed through the chapters just to find out the end!
Cliff hangers, drama, romance you got it all in there!
Excellent job!
I will be waiting for the next book 💜

Interesting Read

Overall your story has been quite interesting to read, alot of unexpected twists. Your MC is quite cool, I love her sarcasm. I would just reccomend in your final edit (dont stress until you are done) to fix up the grammar a tad.
I was still able to read it just fine, and I will impatiently wait for the next chapter. 😉

Nice Flow

This a great start to a a romance in the making!

There is a building plot, the characters are good. The first chapter drew me in, overall I liked this work in progress. I tend to stick to fantasy but I would love to see how this develops and ends.
Great Start!
There is a few grammar issues (dont stress about them until your editing)
Overall I would love to see how you develop this story and I hope my comments came across okay!

An Heir For Oragon

I love how descriptive you write your character's !
A work in progress im intrigued with, I have a billion questions. But I will leave no spoilers or ask for any.
Her relationships were written well, I feel some possible real chemistry between The King and MC.
I loved her brotherly love and how you wrote that.. Its just something I love reading.
I would recommend this book 😍

Lust

The chapters I have read so far were good, you have developed your characters great. There were a few grammar issues but nothing that isn't easily fixed up. ( I always say don't edit as you write, do it at the end!)
Good Start :)

Lovingly described

Your descriptions are detailed really well, loved your first chapter.
so far I am liking it, would recommend to anyone looking for a good romance to follow!

I cannot wait for more!

I love the Greek mythology. so anything to do with it, is just a sold factor for me.
How you made it all work together was so good, I had a laugh at the weatherman thing.
Your Mc is intelligent and its great to read!
This is a read I would love to read more of!

So good!

As soon as I started reading..it caught me, this story is what I look for to keep me reading!!

My cruel blind alpha

Good story 💜

Humanborn

I like it 😊 has me waiting for the remainder of chapters...