Chloe. J

A writer who likes to dabble on the dark side...

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An amazing work in progress

Im usually quite fussy in regards to werewolf novels, mostly because alot have the same style plot.
However you have a unique spin, sometimes switching POV in storys can be very hard to follow. But you kept it up and perfect!
There are a few words missing and letters in some places. (For your final edit, dont stress about them now)
Overall, I loved your characters. Despite Grace and how she was raised and what she is. She remained mysterious and reminded me of someone fully capable in an epic action movie.
Hunter I feel is growing and I love his heavy ties to his best friend and his loyalty.
I also loved how you added little quotes (I took time to read them and loved how they flowed with that particular chapter)
Finally your cover is AMAZING
Good job, amazing work. πŸ’œ

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Epic read!

So many moments had me going, questioning and feeling like I was not reading quick enough.
Usually I love my fantasy genres,
I love the the dark traits in the characters and mysterious atmospheres they seem to carry!
Please keep the chapters coming!

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Good read

Its an interesting start, suggesting twists to come.
A few errors, but nothing that cannot be fixed!
I would suggest it to those who like this genre!
I will follow and see how it updates :)

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Interesting start

The writing style is easy to understand, chapter one, left me wanting to know why and what happened which definitely drew me in. Keep it up! I will follow to see how it all pan's out!

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Descriptive!

I love how descriptive this book is!
I feel like I can see exactly what the characters are wearing and each character has their own personality that I can easily feel and read as well!
I don't like to play favourites but Nessa is definitely in my list!
I cant wait to read more updates!

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Very good!

I like mateo!.. your characters are very likable!
I love where this story is headed!

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Addicted

Hooking me just like the first one, mooooore need moooreeeee!

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Amazing!!!

I am usually such a fussy reader with wereolf novels, but this book, was a crazy ride that was nothing but amazing.
I was drawn to all her characters, feeling the emotions just as they do. I recommend this book to all those looking for a unique must read!!!

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Unexpected

LOVING THE UNEXPECTED EVIL
Reminds me of a famous book, which I am obsessed with. Until now I hadn't had the pleasure of finding anything like it.
Can't wait to finish it!

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A game of hide and seek

Great read, interesting plot!
Descriptions were good, overall a very interesting read. No spoilers, would definitely recommend to those who love a good amount of crime and twist in a book!
Author has done well!

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Addictive!

You had me addicted, I would attempt to speed through the chapters just to find out the end!
Cliff hangers, drama, romance you got it all in there!
Excellent job!
I will be waiting for the next book πŸ’œ

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Interesting Read

Overall your story has been quite interesting to read, alot of unexpected twists. Your MC is quite cool, I love her sarcasm. I would just reccomend in your final edit (dont stress until you are done) to fix up the grammar a tad.
I was still able to read it just fine, and I will impatiently wait for the next chapter. πŸ˜‰

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ROMANCE

I adore your writing style, you have me hooked.
Romance, emotion, questions you have it all!
Off to read more 😍
Recommended to those romance lovers β€πŸ’™

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Nice Flow

This a great start to a a romance in the making!

There is a building plot, the characters are good. The first chapter drew me in, overall I liked this work in progress. I tend to stick to fantasy but I would love to see how this develops and ends.
Great Start!
There is a few grammar issues (dont stress about them until your editing)
Overall I would love to see how you develop this story and I hope my comments came across okay!

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WOW

Not the sort I usually read and I have been drawn in to this story. I love your writing style and descriptions.
This story deserves many words, but I am out of any I can put that would compliment this master piece!
I sincerely hope you consider publishing this one day 😁

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An Heir For Oragon

I love how descriptive you write your character's !
A work in progress im intrigued with, I have a billion questions. But I will leave no spoilers or ask for any.
Her relationships were written well, I feel some possible real chemistry between The King and MC.
I loved her brotherly love and how you wrote that.. Its just something I love reading.
I would recommend this book 😍

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Lust

The chapters I have read so far were good, you have developed your characters great. There were a few grammar issues but nothing that isn't easily fixed up. ( I always say don't edit as you write, do it at the end!)
Good Start :)

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Sealed

If your looking for romance with what feels like a Cinderella theme, I would recommend this novel. I question what will happen in chapter 4 and will keep a check on this story. Really liking it so far!

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Lovingly described

Your descriptions are detailed really well, loved your first chapter.
so far I am liking it, would recommend to anyone looking for a good romance to follow!

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I cannot wait for more!

I love the Greek mythology. so anything to do with it, is just a sold factor for me.
How you made it all work together was so good, I had a laugh at the weatherman thing.
Your Mc is intelligent and its great to read!
This is a read I would love to read more of!

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So good!

As soon as I started reading..it caught me, this story is what I look for to keep me reading!!

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My cruel blind alpha

Good story πŸ’œ

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Humanborn

I like it 😊 has me waiting for the remainder of chapters...

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