What is your opinion?
A little bit of love
"The story was very interesting and I loved reading it."
A good read
"Loved the plot and the sense of mystery in the book. The characters seem a bit unreal though. And your grammar is a bit off. Don't worry, you will get there. Plus, this is one of my first LGBTQ+ reads. So I think you did a good job. All the best for your future books. Hugs, Missy. "
Needs improvement but not bad
"I like the story and plot itself but the grammar and POVs confuse me. The grammar needs a lot of improvement. The tenses of the verb are what I usually notice that are incorrect. The POVs are very confusing since it changes without warning most of the time which gives me hard time knowing on who says what but I think that's on me. I also suggest using double quotation marks to help the readers (mostly me) that what they are reading is a dialogue. Don't worry about it. You'll get better at writing. P.S. I usually don't write reviews so I hope this helps. "
4/5 🌟
"I somewhat enjoy the plot and much of the story. However, I just had to stop and review this before going any further. I don't think the characters' actions and dialogue seem real. It just sounds like something in a commercial or an advert on television. So that's mainly what I consider working on."
