Chapter 1 | Interwined Forever by Ana Winter at Inkitt
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Interwined Forever

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Summary

You don't know how deeply you are intertwined with someone until you try to walk away from them." Loretta Rivera a feisty and confident girl who has a troubled past. She lives with her 5 year old sister Juliet. With her parents out of the picture, she has no one and has to work for her own survival. But what job can a highschool student do to make money for her and her sister's survival? Streetfighting. Tornado is what they call her. ---------------------------------------------------- Stephen Forbes, the golden boy, cliché life as everyone thinks he has. But what was under that facàde that he was hiding? He has a past too. What will happen when their fates will intertwine? What will happen when secrets are revealed?

Status
6yrs ago
Chapters
4
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

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Loretta's POV

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Someone was behind me.

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I could feel the presence.

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I slowly turned behind and gasped saw a man gazing at me with intensity.

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I wanted to ask him who he was? What he was doing here?

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I could not speak.

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No words were coming out of my mouth.

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He took out a knife swiftly and sta--

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Rinnnnnngggggg

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"Aah--" I shouted and could see the off white coloured walls of my familiar room.

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I was gasping for air.

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This nightmare has been haunting me for years and still I couldn't forget it.

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It is more like a memory. But I can't dwell upon the past much.

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I looked on my left and smiled looking at my sister, Jules curled up.

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My only hope.

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She looked so peaceful while sleeping.

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I turned around and looked at the clock at my sidetable.

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It was 6:30. I got up slowly without waking my sister from her dreamland.

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I freshened up and went to the gym in the house.

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I started with my warm up and started with my workout.

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I need to be always fit and ready for my match.

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I heard a soft knock and in came my sister in her cute pj's and rubbing her eyes still sleepy.

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"Morning cupcake" I said.

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"Morning terri" she said and hugged my legs.

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Terri is a nickname given by her because she could not speak my entire name which is Loretta.

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"Go freshen up and ask Ms. Darcy to give you pancakes. "I said.

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"But I wanted to eat chocolate fudge cake. "she said pouting.Aww she is so adorable.

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"No! you have been eating only that since 3 days and it is not healthy. "I scolded in a motherly tone.

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She quietly nodded but I saw tears pooling in her eyes. Her lower lip was quivering.

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"Today is your first day at kindergarten so I will take you on my bike "I said.

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Her face immediately lit up like a child getting presents on Christmas and she squealed.She ran shouting towards the kitchen telling Ms Darcy about the same. I shook my head smiling.

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Ms Darcy is the cook and also our caretaker. She has basically raised me and Jules as both our parents are no more in our lives.

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I have a faint memory of my mom as I had seen her from when I was a child but about my father, let's just say he left us all alone.

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I sighed and went to the kitchen.

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"Morning Loretta. " Ms Darcy chirped. She is always excited and can light up anyone's mood within seconds.

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"Morning. " I said and sat on one of the stools.

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"So today you are starting as a fresh man. How does it feel? " she squeals.

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"OK? " I said not so enthusiastically.

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I just want to graduate and leave this place. It brings too many memories.

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"Hey it's going to be fine. You will get new friends and will have fun with them but not too much fun. "She said last part like a mother would say.

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I groaned. Not again with the parent lecture.

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She and my sister just laughed at my response.

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I glared at her playfully and started eating the pancakes.

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Soon I finished them and I asked one of the other maids to make my sister ready for school.

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I went to open the garage of my house and took out my red Ducati superleggara V4.

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I climbed on the bike.

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"Come one cupcake. We are leaving." I said shouting.

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"Yessss" she shouted and ran towards my bike.

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She climbed on my back. I started my bike and rode the through the gate of my mansion.

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Yes we are rich. All income comes from my streetfighting. I have been doing it since 5 years because of my sister . I had to do it to keep my sister and myself alive.

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Today was the first day of my school and I am nervous would be the understatement of the century.

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I just have to keep a low profile and complete the year. Yup that's so easy.Not.

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As we reached Jules' kindergarten I slowed down my speed and Jules hopped off it.

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I took her small hand and let her to kindergarten.

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She is like me. She is a confident girl. She is always polite and friendly.

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Well I guess I lied about last part.:-P.

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I am not friendly at all. I just don't want others to know about my life. It's too risky.

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She went to her classroom happily and within seconds she made friends. Wish I was like that. She waved over me and said goodbye and I waved back turned away and left.

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I climbed on the bike and sped off to my school hoping everything would just go alright.

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Little did I know what was going to happen.

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