What is your opinion?
Absolutely Outstanding!
"I read your book thoroughly and found it really amazing, I have read a lot of books of Drama and Humor, but this one is nothing like the others, it was absolutely Outstanding. I really liked the writing style of the author and the Grammar as well. I really like the 5th Chapter. The chapters were long, which would make anyone want to read more. I also liked other books by the same author. These books deserve a lot more success and I hope to see them as a fully published novel. Thanks!"
Gray's Story
"I feel like you are relaying events as they happen with little physical detail or emotion, what do these people look like? Aside from the Pikachu shirt, clothing and physical appearance aren't really mentioned, I'm having trouble imagining what these people look like. How does the character feel about having all these sisters and that his only brother is leaving for college? You have good chapter, and paragraph length, grammar, spelling, and punctuation, and an interesting concept. Keep up the good writing."
