Magnus_K

@magnus_s_kirk, 18 years old, from Calgary, Alberta. Spotify: nocturnalic

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Illusion Forest: Short Story

Forests can be many things, beautiful, scary, filled with life. When you wander into a forest what do you hope it is? Forests can also hold cautionary tales, like: Little Red Riding Hood. But it's...

The Human Doll Ghost Book 25

"Who lives in 3666?" I asked. "Why?" he questions. "People are usually superstitious about things like 666," I comment not wanting to worry him. John notices a female spirit across the street from ...

Mylingar Book 24

"Have there been any particular incidents involving her before?" I asked. "I didn't have time to look up her record, it was late," he answers. Raymond gets a 9-1-1 call late one night. A woman hear...

A Hunter's Sense Of Duty Book 23

"You're protecting monsters. Matt isn't even human, he replaced the Soulton boy. He kidnapped the real Matt. He doesn't care, they don't care," One day when Lock is over at Avery and Rave's house, ...

Ena Book 22

If she spoke would Liam listen or find it weird that I was talking? It had taken me two months to tell him about Juno. Even then it wasn't the truth. What really happened to Juno and Eden Davonshir...

Harmless Book 21

“What’s going on?” Damin asks. “They’re vampires,” Josh answers. Would Damin spare us again with another hunter around? When Jocelyn decides to go back to their house and finds Jethro and his belon...

They're Monsters! Book 20

“Would you kill a monster who hadn’t killed anyone?” I asked finally. Damin starts to wonder why Rave canceled and then showed up at the last minute and who Avery is. Why did Edward cover for him? ...

Where Did I Come From? Book 19

"I thought I was doing you a favor by adopting you, turns out it was a curse," Jethro replies. Matt decides to hide his feelings for Connor from the others. Matt starts to question his adoption by ...

Never Lie Book 14

“Are you crazy?” I question. “I know I sound insane but you got to believe me, I’ll show you, just please,” he exclaims. Jessie Everette's back story. What happened to his family and how did he bec...

Reality Of Us Book 13

“You, talking to me? That’s new. Are you sick or something?” he jokes. John gets a call from an old colleague but when Art wants him to stay in he passes the case to Damin. Raymond being worried ab...

Repairing Dreams

Klaus and Declan have settled into their new home, but some worries are bothering Klaus. He wants to ask Declan to marry him. Is it too soon? Would Declan reject the proposal? He seeks the advice o...

Child Possession Book 11

One odd case that had appeared lately was the string of parents being murdered, with their only children being left alive. A series of brutal murders have started in Salem. Raymond brings Damin in ...

The End of a Long Line of Death Book 7

I told Kate about Dominic Orlando and what I was doing. I didn’t tell Damin, he had enough issues; he didn’t need this to make it any worse. Dominic Orlando is back but Raymond wants to keep Damin ...

How Can You Kill What You Can't See? Book 6

“What is he talking about? Nobody is there.” After Tom's death, Danon's imaginary friend is murdered but if only other children can see him, who killed him and the other children's imaginary friend...

It Will Never Be Over Book 4

He didn’t understand how dangerous Tommy’s and Kate’s houses were. Raymond takes Kate to see Danon and they decide to take her and Danon to a safehouse to make sure they are safe from demons and mo...

The Echo of What Remains

-Harvey Gray has lived the first twenty-two years of his life in a boring old run down conservative town. Wanting to know more and explore the country he decides to leave town one week and starts p...

A Recording of The Truth....

“If you’ve found this and no one has told you about it, you’re the first one to know the truth.” Seventeen-year-old, Felix Capper disappears one day, no one knows where he went or what happened to ...

Cosmos

“Which one is your favorite?” I suddenly looking around realizing I don’t know. Fourth book after Unextinguished Art, Masterpiece, and Sparker. Declan wants to have his father over for dinner but h...

Family Of Dreams Book 15

I put my revolver away and applied pressure to my bullet wound. I slowly made my way back to the entrance of the caves. John gets a call from an old enemy, Denver. He has brought his long-dead twin...

Unextinguished Artwork

It sparked something in my mind, the urge to paint. Declan March has just lost all his artwork that was keeping him afloat well he was jobless in a fire, he is forced to move in with a friend of a ...

Bloom

They live in a world where PDA is forbidden. Deacon Lavenders and Ace Carstrella live in a world where PDA is illegal, not only that but if you slip up you are punished. Deacon and Ace have been hi...

Life's Curves Book 2

“Damin’s brother is dead" A shapeshifter by the name of Dominic Orlando appears and starts killing his old classmates who were suspects in his girlfriend's murder. A new demon called Davon Cross ap...

The Risk To Closing The Gates Of Hell Book 5

The prophecy stated that three trials had to be completed to close the Gates of Hell. Damin attempts to close the Gates of Hell to protect Kate and Danon, but Raymond and Tom won't allow him to ris...

Sparker

Klaus was looking out the window well blue and red lights danced across his face. He looked panicked and worried. The third book after Unextinguished Art, and Masterpiece. Declan and Klaus have bee...

Betrayal Book 18

“I thought you knew I wasn’t the real Mason,” he acknowledges. I set the changeling down. He transforms into a guy about my age and height. Matt Ashcroft's back story. Does Matt really know who he ...

Union Book 28

“John, what did you do? I just saw Astra outside. What did you sell to Nergal? How many years?” Chaz asked grabbing my shoulders. Art and John's wedding is just around the corner and John's guilt i...

A Soul For A Soul Book 29

I saw his eyes, they were twitchy. His hands shook. He wasn’t steady anymore, he was losing it. Eden starts wondering where Liam disappears off to, he says he's not hunting but if he's not, what is...

Monsters Exist Book 27

“John, what are you talking about? Did something happen?” I question. More results come back from the bones found on Highway 95. Where is she really from? Raymond starts going through missing perso...

Poisoned Light

“Oh, he called the cops, great. Listen, I’m just concerned for my son’s wellbeing, my wife is sick,” he tries. Michael Clover, a 27-year-old, studying for his Master's in Psychology and needs any t...

Life Painted On Skin

I remember crying and my father laughing as he stained me with a permanent ink-filled scar. Sixteen-year-old Hayden O’Connor is the son of a famous tattoo artist, Michael O’Connor. Back when he was...

Masterpiece

I noticed words on the scroll’s exterior. Nightmares. A sequel to Unextinguished Artwork. From Klaus' perspective. Declan and he have been living together for a couple of months when Declan decides...

Soul Saving Book 12

When I arrived, John was pacing and mumbling to himself. Lysander’s vessel was lying on the floor. The Eclipse is here. It's time to save Astra's soul. But the plans have changed. John has to get i...

Ally Book 9

But, of course, that couldn't last. I saw an obstacle ahead on the Interstate. A hitchhiker. Damin is picking up an old case that Tom was going to take care of, one problem the case is in Rochester...

Responsibility Book 26

I was shocked to see Yazu, the last time I’d seen her was the night I said goodbye to her. Damin travels to see Rave and Avery because they are having issues with Josh not taking his turning well. ...

A New Life's Explanation Book 8

“The creatures that appear human, eat the living and dead and can only be killed by decapitation or severe head trauma? Yeah, I know of them." Casper Ridenhour is back and he has a case for Damin, ...

Young Blood Book 16

“They wanted me to be somebody I wasn’t and because I wouldn’t be who they wanted me to be they threw me out,” “Somebody, you’re not?” Some children have mysteriously fallen into comas in Marksvil...

Abandoned Book 17

He turns and kisses me as his parents emerge from the barn. They see us but Rave doesn’t seem to care. Rave starts avoiding his parents well he decides whether to tell them if he is a vampire or no...

Constantine Book 10

“My name’s John Constantine. Do you know where I can find Tom Peters?” John Constantine is about to join the hunting game and well he normally doesn't like involving others in his cases, he wants D...

It's Not Over Book 3

“Really, Damin? He’s a child. A child! There aren’t demons everywhere you go,” I argue. After finding out his brother is alive Damin becomes more cautious around him. Raymond tries to reason with h...

Ignorance's Lesson Book 1

"This kid has shown up at every crime scene we've been to for the last month. Either he's involved or he knows something he's not telling us." 15-year-old Damin Colt is a hunter. Not the type of hu...

Our Future

It all started three years ago; of course that seems like a lifetime now. My brother, Sam doesn't know any different. Nathan is a nineteen-year-old in the middle of the third year of a zombie apoca...

The Silence of Sound by Benjamin

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The Sound Of Silence

An interesting and different concept. The story seems to go beyond telling a simple story from beginning to end and has a meaning or lesson that is taught throughout it. I did spot a few grammar errors and missing words but other than that it's quite driving and keeps the reader hooked.

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thank you, elliot by Andy

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Reminiscent

The plot, characters and their development are all eye-catching. It is very realistic and relatable which drives a reader to connect parts of themselves with the characters. It reminds me of Aristotle & Dante Discover the Secrets of the Universe. The only thing I think you could improve upon is the longer paragraphs, it is easy to get lost in a long wall of text. If everything in the paragraph seems necessary you may want to split them up into smaller paragraphs. I look forward to the rest of the story.

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Dominant & Submissive by Edna_Bruce27

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Interesting

I'm not really into erotica or heavy romance novels, but the plot seems interesting and well paced for a longer novel, the grammar in the early chapters could really use some work and setting description could improve as well.

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