Spectacular!

"The first paragraph was very impressive creating an impressive hook for the readers, getting straight to the point about the storyline and who Jynx is. The best part about this story was by far the plot creating an interesting different world with good characters. The main character was cool although I wish there was more explanation on how he looked like. I saw a couple of grammar mistakes but the grammar still deserves five stars. The writing was amazing as well with very good word choices and an amazing explanation of how the world looks around them. With an amazing dystopian plot, good characters, spectacular descriptions of there surrounding, and with quite the interesting ending this book deserves more attention. Keep up the good work! This was a perfect story."