What is your opinion?
Nice
"Grammatical errors aside , story was nice , keep writting more interesting stories , God always with you 😊"
A good start
"I liked the start but I think you need to know some writing techniques I think. You are reusing some words or phrases which affect the flow of the story. I liked the plotline though. It's very interesting and intriguing. I'll like to read more. You just need to enhance your writing a bit. You got talent but with a little effort, I think your book will be a hit👍🏼💜. I love these kinds of stories. And one more thing be a bit more descriptive it will help to create an image in readers mind( PS: you added a lot but it was advice for future) "
nice
"Good storyline. Work abit on your writing style and grammar then you'll be good."
His love.
"I love the plot of this short story. With the few words that you have written I have fallen in love with your story and it has connected with my heart. I like your creative ways of explaining things and connecting the story together. I have noticed that you have very few grammar mistakes which is great, however I have noticed that you do not stick to a tense in your writing. Like past, present and future tense. You can jump from present to past tense in one sentence. Which is not a bad thing you just have to make sure that the sentence lines up and makes sense. Overall I love the way you write and I like the story very much and I'm sorry if I came off as rude. There is nothing wrong with your writing it's very inspiring and very passionate. Just get someone to check over your grammar. Please keep writing I would love to see more from you and I will happily check out you other books."
Very beautiful
"I loved the book it was very satisfying. The plot was great and had a good outcome. The grammar just needed a little fixing, other than that the book’s great. Furthermore I would recommend this book to anyone because it’s that great. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️"
loooovve it
"very well written and it was awesome! i liked the characters a lot. your writing is way better than mine.🙂😎🙂😎🙂"
Loved it!
"Loved the one-shot and the characters in it :)"
His Love
"I love the concept of the story it became very engaging as i kept reading further. I agree with Leslie.H about making the story a bit longer Through out the story i can tell that you are putting everything in it and it is a really good one-shot book. Last but not least try to detail one of the dramatic parts. But overall wow like honestly i try to write but even if my life depends on it i can't. I hope this made sense :) - Yanee"
Happily Ever after
"I enjoyed the primise of the story. Emotions were well played out. I was not dissppointed on the ending."
His Love
"I enjoyed reading your story not bad for a beginner in writing. Trust me I was there once ;) The story could've been longer you know? But it's alright I still loved it! Good writing skills I loved your characters! Hope this review helped I can't wait to hear more from you on your books and on my books ^^ -Leslie H."
Loved it
"The story was really good and interesting. I'm just sad that it was a one shot but all in all great story and good ending, Keep up the good work."
His Love
"beautifully written, even though spelling errors were present but the beauty of your writing hid it well. The message of life and love was beautifully showcased. Very well written."
His Love~ [Unknowingly His]
"The story is good and the flow is great. I think the author's writing style to was great and her vocabulary is good. Keep up!! "
His Love
"This story is soo amazing I have no words to explain how much I loved it.. it was kind of relatable.. the last bit where they said be mines and oh my days it drove me crazy... this is perfect ♥️"
Good Job
"Daniza was so meant to be!! I think you did a great job here, I feel like you have a lot of potential. Good luck with all your future stories. You have a beautiful writing style so embrace it😊😊💕💕"
Feelings
"Grammatical errors aside, I like how you expressed the character's emotions within a few words. It's a good thing that you explained the summary of the story first in the introduction, because at the part where Kinza was upset at Dinyal for letting her sister live in their house, if I didn't read the intro, that would've confused me a bit. Also, I like Kinza and Dinyal's intimacy. 💚"
His Love (by Noya_Avery)
"This is a very cute short story that was built off of a book (or series, I don't know) that I did not read, but I will say that for those who are very particular about their punctuation and grammar, this would be a VERY hard read. I appreciated the dialogue and I especially liked the main female character and her slight development, but there are some serious punctuation errors and it needs a little bit of work. All in all, though, if you're looking for a cute short book to read and don't mind what was mentioned above, I'd definitely recommend it."
Amazing start
"As the author informed about being this to the first story, yet it is good and amazing. I love the description of the main characters feelings. Keep it up. Please do write a whole story. I felt the potential of amazing romantic story."
Romance stories
"I love reading this short stories ... the plot is amazing ... but I hate evil sister ... thanks god they got happy ending in the end"
Adorable!
"This is an adorable one-shot :)"
