What is your opinion?
Falling Hopes
"I enjoyed this book. I liked the way it ended by not leaving lose ends. "
Absolutely Amazing
"I love everything about this story. I want more...more...more. This author is superb. I am fascinated by his amazing work. I give him five stars."
Fantastic
"the story is absolutly fantastic, just waiting on an ending for it. cant wait to see more storys (and im not just saying that because i was in the book :D)"
I ♥ U
"Ok I have been reading this since the author planned on making this just for fun. And I love reading this... Hopefully I wish that this will give me a lot of impact. It gave me a lot of impact though XD.... Celina and Jordan couples for me!"
pretty good story
"I don't like to spoil much with a review for future readers, but it was definitely worth it. I'd say this genre is usually fairly generic and overused but the manner in which it was presented was thoughtful and the writer clearly has talent."
Falling hopes
"Not bad drags on in spots some very graphics love\sex scenes if you like that kind of reading."
Name games
"Hi! First, thank you for a good read. I didn't make it quite all the way through because my head was starting to spin from keeping track of everything, but I pushed through to chapter 9-ish and I'm really glad that I saw this story. Apocalyptic stories, with or without zombies, typically aren't my cup of tea, so I'm already impressed because you managed to suck me in. I think you've established just the right amount of tension, so that while there's always an awareness of impending doom, it's not overwhelming. You balance dark moments and light moments very nicely. My main criticism is simply that of organisation-- you have a lot of characters and a lot of plot lines going on in these beginning chapters, and they can be difficult to keep straight. When the scene changes but you're writing in the first person, it can take me a while to figure out who's speaking and whether they're new or not, and a couple times I had to reread in order to figure it out. I also noticed that you repeat names a couple times, and I'm not sure if its intentional or not. "Gavin" is the asshole that Ajani kills in the beginning, and then he's also the guy who welcomes them to the outpost. "Nguyen" is the last name of the Gavin that welcomes them to the outpost, and its also Celina's last name. I think you might also have a typo at some point in the Gavin & Fred scene-- the name Martin pops up out of nowhere and then isn't repeated. I really enjoy the diversity in background that your characters have, and it makes it visually interesting when I picture them as a group. You might consider revising some of the character description though-- I noticed that you tend to have a rather formulaic paragraph of physical description for each of them, and even though their features are distinct, the formats of their descriptions all echo each other. I usually try to plant those kinds of details within the rest of the text, as additional details in scenes, to prevent the need for heavy descriptive paragraphs. I hope this has been helpful! I'm already very invested in your story, so I"ll definitely be back to continue reading and watch for updates! Dovetails and dragon claws, The Hatter"
Hmm...
"Like the story and concept, hate the writing style. Sometimes you don't know who's talking with whom. "
