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Beware the Truth!

" A lonely thirteen year old named Ralphie lives in a stilted, barren world. He never visits children his own age and his parents treat him almost as an after thought. His only entertainment is in the form of a headset. Through his headset he can virtually visit other places even though those areas also feel empty. Yet, bleak as Ralphie’s world is, there creeps at the edges of his life a dark, dark secret. One that is capable of destroying his entire world if ever discovered. I don’t dare reveal more but what a wonderfully creative story. I didn’t see the ending coming and was genuinely chilled by it. The author MG Trazor has a very strong narrative voice. By that I mean there is a personality and a skill in his (or her) writing. It’s not the drab “...he said this, then she said that. He did this. She did that.” In fact his/her narrative voice reminded me a little bit of my own if I can butter myself up a bit. I’m not sure if I’ll ever reach the stage of becoming a traditional published author, but I wouldn’t be surprised if we were to see a MG Trazor novel in Barnes and Nobles one day. Remember, you heard it here first. "

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