Inkitt
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Virus x

"I like the story so far creative and different than most peices I have read"

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I hope u continue the story

"I really liked this hope that there are more chapters to come"

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Engaging

"Its a very interesting story that grabs you at the first words and keeps you interested until the end. The way that the author jumps back and forth from telling the story and exposition keeps you interesting and is done in a way that plays to the overall plot of the story. Overall, really well done."

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Zombies

"Really enjoying the story line. To bad the friend. Good writing "

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I forgot

"I am enjoying this read very much . Love the idea behind it . I would like to have the characters 'fleshed out ' a bit . Theres no substance to them as it is ....... Of course , i would also like the author to invest in a grammatical app. Or spell check at the very least. "

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Is guud my dud

"Yeassss tthee plot qienched my thirst for some guud apocalypse shiz. Buttt,, the spelling and grammar mistakes irked me sooooooo much. I could barely get through 2 chapters..."

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Mostly Good Plot

"The plot is compelling, but it cannot make up for the spelling and grammar mistakes which litter the whole story. The writing is clunky in some places and it doesn't have a consistent style."

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good

"add more chapters.. she should have told others about msg as it costed a life"

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Pretty good

"I enjoyed the plot overall. Following these girls' adventures with friendship and loss. But there are a few grammar issues. I would've also enjoyed seeing the mother's point of view instead of her just being temporary. But overall a decent 7/10 I've read worse books but I've also read better. Solid job!"

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