What is your opinion?
Second chance
"I like the characters, how each falling in, the story is so interesting that one can stop reading it to the very end."
Good
"Great book "
Second Chance
"- I liked the fact that the chapters were not too long and not too short. - I would recommend the book to everyone who comes across the book. - I chose the rating because the book is just perfect😊."
Second Chance
"This was a great teenage love short story! I felt you really glazed over somethings (i.e.: Calvin's POV on her and situation in general.) It has a good plot that could (and should be) expanded on to make a really complete story. I',m curious to know how old you are? One of these days I can foresee you with a best seller, you might even be able to make it on a VERY PG 12 level but once you experience some more adult issues in life (not just sex) you will be an author to be on the look out for. FYI-It's very unprofessional to add your "thoughts/comments" at the base of every chapter as if they are part of the story which they clearly are not! Take them all and summarize the as "Author's Comments" or as a Outline to your story. If you have to apologize for a chapter being to short, perhaps you should edit or revise it before posting it? And your story itself should lead the reader, not directions from you in a "footnote". Also, were you aware that "chapters" on this site can be up to 10,000 words long? {Notice "Writing style score"} Keep trying!"
Too Immature
"I didn’t like the authors comments at the end of every chapter. "
Second Chance
"Its an ok book and I quite enjoyed reading it. I love the overall story"
